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Precipitation

podium leaning weather swaying left or right gravity awaits ***

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Anna Hopper

Date: 3/8/2020 9:27:00 AM

That wicked, awful gravity! Love it!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/9/2020 9:00:00 AM

Hope your world is being kind to you x!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/6/2020 4:23:00 PM

Gravity awaits us all - this is certainly suspenseful!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/7/2020 9:02:00 AM

Thank you :))) xomo!

Bette Bavington

Date: 3/3/2020 5:44:00 PM

All things can feel the change in the weather. I feel it and gravity too. Who knows which way the podium will go. Nicely done.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/4/2020 8:28:00 AM

It sure is scary. Thank you Bette, xomo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/3/2020 10:34:00 AM

Ooh...I can feel it! Great one!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/4/2020 8:26:00 AM

Thank you Kim! :))) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/2/2020 5:41:00 PM

Your first totally serious poem ever perhaps! ~ in gravitas est veritas (Yeah, sure...) :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/3/2020 7:08:00 AM

Nah ;), there's been one or two... Hugs! xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/2/2020 11:37:00 AM

How a delightful Senryu dearest, Maureen. Hugs xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/3/2020 7:08:00 AM

Thank you sweet D! xomo Hugs!

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/2/2020 9:54:00 AM

I love it! Your words are chosen with light. There shouldn't be any sides, hopefully you can stand it back up without falling. :}

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/3/2020 7:15:00 AM

Thank you Mark! We could do with a side of sanity ;), xomo

Eric Ashford

Date: 3/1/2020 12:39:00 PM

LOL good-un Maureen. Gravity wins in the end, and it's usually going South.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2020 7:38:00 AM

Yup. ;), Thank you Eric! xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/1/2020 12:28:00 PM

Aye! Politicians need reminding that gravity pulls down meteors! Well said! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2020 7:37:00 AM

Oh the unthinkable! I am unsinkable! ;), xomo!

Jeff Connelly

Date: 3/1/2020 10:05:00 AM

Definitely a grave situation Maureen. These days, swaying politically left or right seems to mean nothing. Gravity makes everything fall down.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2020 7:34:00 AM

Well said. The polarization is mind boggling. I'm happy for this place; a vastly diverse community, for the most part above politics. xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/1/2020 9:58:00 AM

Well done Maureen. I read it a couple times :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2020 7:27:00 AM

Thank you Heidi! I like using homonyms to deliver a couple reads ;), xomo! <3

Silent One

Date: 3/1/2020 9:14:00 AM

Could be fatal ....

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/2/2020 7:24:00 AM

Life generally is ;),

Rico Leffanta
Date: 3/1/2020 12:26:00 PM

Wish! Wish!