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Precipitation

podium leaning
            weather swaying left or right

                       gravity awaits







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environmentpoliticalword playsenryu

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Anna Hopper

March 8, 2020 at 9:27 AM

That wicked, awful gravity! Love it!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 9, 2020 at 9:00 AM

Hope your world is being kind to you x!

Michelle Faulkner

March 6, 2020 at 4:23 PM

Gravity awaits us all - this is certainly suspenseful!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 7, 2020 at 9:02 AM

Thank you :))) xomo!

Bette Bavington

March 3, 2020 at 5:44 PM

All things can feel the change in the weather. I feel it and gravity too. Who knows which way the podium will go. Nicely done.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 4, 2020 at 8:28 AM

It sure is scary. Thank you Bette, xomo

Kim Rodrigues

March 3, 2020 at 10:34 AM

Ooh...I can feel it! Great one!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 4, 2020 at 8:26 AM

Thank you Kim! :))) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

March 2, 2020 at 5:41 PM

Your first totally serious poem ever perhaps! ~ in gravitas est veritas (Yeah, sure...) :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 3, 2020 at 7:08 AM

Nah ;), there's been one or two... Hugs! xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 2, 2020 at 11:37 AM

How a delightful Senryu dearest, Maureen. Hugs xxx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 3, 2020 at 7:08 AM

Thank you sweet D! xomo Hugs!

Mark Koplin

March 2, 2020 at 9:54 AM

I love it! Your words are chosen with light. There shouldn't be any sides, hopefully you can stand it back up without falling. :}

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 3, 2020 at 7:15 AM

Thank you Mark! We could do with a side of sanity ;), xomo

Eric Ashford

March 1, 2020 at 12:39 PM

LOL good-un Maureen. Gravity wins in the end, and it's usually going South.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 2, 2020 at 7:38 AM

Yup. ;), Thank you Eric! xomo

Rico Leffanta

March 1, 2020 at 12:28 PM

Aye! Politicians need reminding that gravity pulls down meteors! Well said! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 2, 2020 at 7:37 AM

Oh the unthinkable! I am unsinkable! ;), xomo!

Jeff Connelly

March 1, 2020 at 10:05 AM

Definitely a grave situation Maureen. These days, swaying politically left or right seems to mean nothing. Gravity makes everything fall down.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 2, 2020 at 7:34 AM

Well said. The polarization is mind boggling. I'm happy for this place; a vastly diverse community, for the most part above politics. xomo

Heidi Sands

March 1, 2020 at 9:58 AM

Well done Maureen. I read it a couple times :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 2, 2020 at 7:27 AM

Thank you Heidi! I like using homonyms to deliver a couple reads ;), xomo! <3

Silent One

March 1, 2020 at 9:14 AM

Could be fatal ....

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

March 2, 2020 at 7:24 AM

Life generally is ;),

Rico Leffanta

March 1, 2020 at 12:26 PM

Wish! Wish!

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