Tim Smith Poet Acrostic

Precious Moon

Yonder light of moon-kissed rays
on blessed breeze you lie
under cover of the milky way
reach out to every cusp of sky

Moon my precious moon
open your wings
open your gilded wings
now and evermore 

Shine your sultry soul
here into mine
into the loneliness of dusk
near thee enter upon me
endless glows of your
sacred smile

Fly high moon my precious moon
over my wayward path
reigning me home

Mysterious lady  let this butterfly dance 
effortlessly in the glint of your romance

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Phil Capitano October 17, 2016 at 6:53 PM WOW!!! This is tremendous; love the final image. Enchanting. Tim Smith October 17, 2016 at 8:01 PM Thank you very much Phil.

Charlie Smith September 30, 2016 at 11:49 AM Lovely Tim, well done... Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 2:34 PM Thanks Charlie

Maurice Yvonne September 30, 2016 at 10:05 AM Effen stunning. Doesn't get much better. A Fav! Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:42 AM Thank you my friend.

Constance La France September 30, 2016 at 9:34 AM Tim, this is a wonderful write, beautifully penned~ Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:42 AM Thank you Constance.

White Wolf September 30, 2016 at 8:22 AM Love it!!! Mt personal name for the moon is Lakarna. /|\ Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:41 AM I like that name. Thanks Rick

Paul Callus September 30, 2016 at 8:06 AM Beautiful and romantic, Tim. You excel in this type of poetry! #7 Regards // paul Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:40 AM Thank you Paul. It means alot coming from you.

Charmaine Chircop September 30, 2016 at 2:47 AM You make the pale moon shine so beautifully on your page Tim...Such a romantic connection between man and moon ...Beautiful. Love the acrostic tooA fave Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:40 AM Thanks for the fave : )

Charmaine Chircop September 30, 2016 at 2:46 AM You make the pale moon shine so beautifully on your page Tim...Such a romantic connection between man and moon ...Beautiful. A fave Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:39 AM I think the connection is beautiful. Hence all the romantic poems to her.

Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2016 at 8:40 PM ahhh, moon as a goddess . May she fly unto you!!! Tim Smith September 30, 2016 at 10:38 AM Thank you Andrea. I hope so.

Daniel Turner September 29, 2016 at 4:01 PM I think we're going to have to change your name to Romeo, Tim. Lol Tim Smith September 29, 2016 at 4:04 PM Lol...I'll be back to visit you later. Off to my daughter's diving meet.