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Precious Moon

Yonder light of moon-kissed rays
on blessed breeze you lie
under cover of the milky way
reach out to every cusp of sky

Moon my precious moon
open your wings
open your gilded wings
now and evermore 

Shine your sultry soul
here into mine
into the loneliness of dusk
near thee enter upon me
endless glows of your
sacred smile

Fly high moon my precious moon
over my wayward path
reigning me home

Mysterious lady  let this butterfly dance 
effortlessly in the glint of your romance

Copyright © Tim Smith | Year Posted 2016

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Phil Capitano Date: 10/17/2016 6:53:00 PM WOW!!! This is tremendous; love the final image. Enchanting. Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 10/17/2016 8:01:00 PM Thank you very much Phil.

Charlie Smith Date: 9/30/2016 11:49:00 AM Lovely Tim, well done... Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 2:34:00 PM Thanks Charlie

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/30/2016 10:05:00 AM Effen stunning. Doesn't get much better. A Fav! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:42:00 AM Thank you my friend.

Constance La France Date: 9/30/2016 9:34:00 AM Tim, this is a wonderful write, beautifully penned~ Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:42:00 AM Thank you Constance.

White Wolf Date: 9/30/2016 8:22:00 AM Love it!!! Mt personal name for the moon is Lakarna. /|\ Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:41:00 AM I like that name. Thanks Rick

Paul Callus Date: 9/30/2016 8:06:00 AM Beautiful and romantic, Tim. You excel in this type of poetry! #7 Regards // paul Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:40:00 AM Thank you Paul. It means alot coming from you.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/30/2016 2:47:00 AM You make the pale moon shine so beautifully on your page Tim...Such a romantic connection between man and moon ...Beautiful. Love the acrostic tooA fave Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:40:00 AM Thanks for the fave : )

Charmaine Chircop Date: 9/30/2016 2:46:00 AM You make the pale moon shine so beautifully on your page Tim...Such a romantic connection between man and moon ...Beautiful. A fave Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:39:00 AM I think the connection is beautiful. Hence all the romantic poems to her.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/29/2016 8:40:00 PM ahhh, moon as a goddess . May she fly unto you!!! Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/30/2016 10:38:00 AM Thank you Andrea. I hope so.

Daniel Turner Date: 9/29/2016 4:01:00 PM I think we're going to have to change your name to Romeo, Tim. Lol Login to Reply Tim Smith Date: 9/29/2016 4:04:00 PM Lol...I'll be back to visit you later. Off to my daughter's diving meet.