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Precious Moon

Yonder light of moon-kissed rays on blessed breeze you lie under cover of the milky way reach out to every cusp of sky Moon my precious moon open your wings open your gilded wings now and evermore Shine your sultry soul here into mine into the loneliness of dusk near thee enter upon me endless glows of your sacred smile Fly high moon my precious moon over my wayward path reigning me home Mysterious lady let this butterfly dance effortlessly in the glint of your romance

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Phil Capitano

Date: 10/17/2016 6:53:00 PM

WOW!!! This is tremendous; love the final image. Enchanting.

Tim Smith
Date: 10/17/2016 8:01:00 PM

Thank you very much Phil.

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/30/2016 11:49:00 AM

Lovely Tim, well done...

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 2:34:00 PM

Thanks Charlie

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/30/2016 10:05:00 AM

Effen stunning. Doesn't get much better. A Fav!

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 9/30/2016 9:34:00 AM

Tim, this is a wonderful write, beautifully penned~

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 10:42:00 AM

Thank you Constance.

White Wolf

Date: 9/30/2016 8:22:00 AM

Love it!!! Mt personal name for the moon is Lakarna. /|\

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 10:41:00 AM

I like that name. Thanks Rick

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2016 8:06:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic, Tim. You excel in this type of poetry! #7 Regards // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thank you Paul. It means alot coming from you.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/30/2016 2:47:00 AM

You make the pale moon shine so beautifully on your page Tim...Such a romantic connection between man and moon ...Beautiful. Love the acrostic tooA fave

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 10:40:00 AM

Thanks for the fave : )

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/30/2016 2:46:00 AM

You make the pale moon shine so beautifully on your page Tim...Such a romantic connection between man and moon ...Beautiful. A fave

Tim Smith
Date: 9/30/2016 10:39:00 AM

I think the connection is beautiful. Hence all the romantic poems to her.