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Precious Moments

Cherry wood accents, glass entombed precious moments captured, enshrined antique curio cabinet, bring me back in time that porcelain doll, great gram's pearl painted piercing eyes still reflecting her love thoughts of Mimi, now in heaven above that vintage mantle clock, octagonal design all the years sitting on Dad's desk, can't remember the last time it ticked, but I still recall the nights watching you hard at work sitting and pondering over a pile of bills and letters oh how those days were so much better there are many different figurines and collector plates I can't even recall what they are there for But there is one picture I just can't get past I often stop and just stare wishing you were still here the little playful smile always lighting up a room when you walked in those deep caramel eyes, able look past all the smoke and mirrors deep into someone's soul oh how I long to hold oh how I long to feel oh how I long to be be one with you again

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Date: 9/4/2015 12:41:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem on those nostalgic moments you captured in these lines. love phyl
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Date: 9/3/2015 8:51:00 AM
Tim nostalgic. made me teary.. I feel the aching longing...hugs~Olive Eloisa=')
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Date: 9/3/2015 6:11:00 AM
The beauty within your write sized my attention through the whole read....love the imagery and the eloquent flow.... Brilliant one.......A.M.
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Date: 9/2/2015 10:34:00 PM
beautiful write Tim, enjoyed
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:01:00 PM
Lovely write, Tim. Those last four lines really brought the piece home powerfully.
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Date: 9/2/2015 8:44:00 AM
Good friend you misted my eyes with such wor. ds No valuables or antiques are worth as much as a picture or memories of a loved one now gone.. This should be poem of the month..To my fvs.
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Date: 9/2/2015 6:24:00 AM
- Beautiful .... never forget, Tim - I wish you a lovely day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2015 5:35:00 AM
Pearls of memories in the necklace of nostalgia beautifully arranged! A seven my friend, Tim!
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Date: 9/2/2015 12:48:00 AM
A very descriptive one for precious moments. At first I was thinking it might be one for the child's view, but then realized it was looking back with an adult's nostalgia. Very nice.
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