Precious Moment With Grandfather

PRECIOUS MOMENT WITH GRANDFATHER

I had so many tender moments with my grandfather,
who passed away, sixteen days after my tenth birthday.
He showed in so many ways how much he loved me and 
cared for me in little gestures that meant so much to me.

Two days ago I was talking to my eighty five year old
aunt, his last surviving child and who is so dear to me.
She told me that my grandparents loved and adored me
so much and cared about me being their first grandchild. 

Ahh, it made me reminisce all those tender, sweet
moments with my grandparents during my childhood;
but most of all the most tender moment when I saw
how my grandfather looked when I was very ill.

When I was five I had a very high fever that would
not come down and the doctors could not to anything.
I was in bed for days, not able to get up and barely ate.
I could hardly move and talk that I could only open and
close my eyes and looked at everybody around me.

He always stayed with me, watched me and I saw in
his tender gazes the caring, the concern he had for me.
He never gave up and had his friend, a faith healer
or a quack doctor came to do something to save me.

I would never forget, my grandfather staying with his
friend, listening and doing what he asked him to do and 
my grandfather’s faith that he would heal me for his
look of concern turned to hope that I would get well.

I saw my grandfather’s smile at the corner of his mouth
glancing at me while watching what his friend was doing
and I also wondered at that moment why I was able to see
what his friend did step by step, although I was so weak.

Suddenly, I started making slow movements and looked
at everybody and when I glanced at my grandfather, who
was smiling while talking to his friend, I saw the joy in his face
and he came beside me touching my forehead so tenderly.



6/12/21          A Tender Moment From Childhood Poetry
                      Malabika Ray Choudhury

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/16/2021 8:31:00 PM
WoW! Marilene, You wrote such a heartfelt piece about your grandfather. He loved you so much. The love that he had for you was evident in this write. I loved the story about the “ faith healer.” Best wishes in the contest.Thanks for sharing such a memory. Well done:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Evans Avatar
Marilene Evans
Date: 6/16/2021 9:46:00 PM
Alexis, you're so sweet. Thank you. Thank you. Yes, he was so happy that I survived that I had a big party when I turned six (6). Roasted pig and all. I remember we only had roasted pig on our yearly town fiesta or a house wedding. Have a good night.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad