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Precious Doe and Fawn

Their heads raised to greet the dawn

Tender shoots to dine upon

A quick bite then they are gone

Precious doe and fawn

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Michael J. Falotico

March 20, 2011 at 7:38 AM

What a sweet write, I can feel the serrinity in this piece...very nice...Michael

Michael Jordan

March 18, 2011 at 2:09 PM

Francine, excellent poem - the flow was like a brook winding through a meadow; natural as could be, thank ytou for your comment on my poetry, mj

Barbara Gorelick

March 17, 2011 at 5:08 PM

Soon we will have fawns scampering about..the sweetest creatures. Today I saw a newborn calf in a field by the park...it was a special moment. loved your poem. BG

Jack Horne

March 17, 2011 at 3:08 PM

Congrats on your win : ) Jack

Jack Horne

March 17, 2011 at 2:05 PM

Beautiful words,Francine - I've been lucky enough to see a doe and her fawn a couple of times in the woods (rare in this part of England).

George Aul

March 17, 2011 at 11:29 AM

I like your words for this dodoitsu

Carolyn Devonshire

March 17, 2011 at 10:36 AM

They always appear at sunrise or sunset and it is such a blessing to behold the Doe and her fawn, Francine. They may leave soon, but the impression stays with us. Beautiful dodoitsu! Love, Carolyn