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Precious Daughters

Shiny ringlets hanging down Sparkle and bounce as they dance around Alert and bright like warm spring skies Beauty of innocence in those eyes When I hear them laugh and sing It's like music brought on angel's wings Their smile is like the light of day Chasing all dark shadows away Warm bear hugs and butterfly kisses They surpass my fondest wishes What I feel compares to no other Unconditional love for my precious daughters 4-25-2017 (please tell me what you really think)

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Keith Osborne

Date: 5/1/2017 9:03:00 PM

I have three of my own and you just took me back a few years with this one. Surprising how fast they become young women.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/17/2017 11:26:00 AM

I have 3 also, and yes, it is too fast. Mine are grown with their own babies. Each one a new gift that I fall in love with quickly. Thank you for stopping by Keith :)

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 4/29/2017 1:53:00 PM

I think it is wonderful, I have one daughter in heaven and one who will be getting married in a month. Daughter's are so precious. I love the third stanza, especially as one of my little angels is just that, an angel. A seven for this beautiful write.

Lenna Walker
Date: 4/29/2017 4:22:00 PM

I am glad you found joy in this. I have 3 precious daughters and I am truly sorry for your loss. Thank You very much Elizabeth, for your kind words and taking the time to say them. Be blessed