Precious Daughters

Shiny ringlets hanging down
Sparkle and bounce as they dance around

Alert and bright like warm spring skies
Beauty of innocence in those eyes

When I hear them laugh and sing
It's like music brought on angel's wings

Their smile is like the light of day
Chasing all dark shadows away

Warm bear hugs and butterfly kisses
They surpass my fondest wishes

What I feel compares to no other
Unconditional love for my precious daughters
 
                 4-25-2017
(please tell me what you really think)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/1/2017 9:03:00 PM
I have three of my own and you just took me back a few years with this one. Surprising how fast they become young women.
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Lenna Walker
Date: 5/17/2017 11:26:00 AM
I have 3 also, and yes, it is too fast. Mine are grown with their own babies. Each one a new gift that I fall in love with quickly. Thank you for stopping by Keith :)
Date: 4/29/2017 1:53:00 PM
I think it is wonderful, I have one daughter in heaven and one who will be getting married in a month. Daughter's are so precious. I love the third stanza, especially as one of my little angels is just that, an angel. A seven for this beautiful write.
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Date: 4/29/2017 4:22:00 PM
I am glad you found joy in this. I have 3 precious daughters and I am truly sorry for your loss. Thank You very much Elizabeth, for your kind words and taking the time to say them. Be blessed
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