Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Verse

Precious Breath

Marionette, 
wooden smile
desires life,
precious breath,

as father’s
wish floats 
to heaven’s ear.

By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, September 22, 2012
for Nette Onclaud's SEPTOLET THE PUPPET Contest

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Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:47 AM Rhonda , Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl September 28, 2012 at 8:07 AM Big conratulations Rhonda xx

Carol Sunshine Brown September 28, 2012 at 5:26 AM Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson September 27, 2012 at 5:24 PM Pinocchio. Lovely memories. Loved this one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Barbara Gorelick September 27, 2012 at 5:12 PM Great job...this is "precious"...congrats. BG

Andrea Dietrich September 27, 2012 at 4:59 PM ahhh, just like Pinnochio (can't spell it, but you know what I mean). This is precious. Congratulations on your win.

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2012 at 1:42 PM Pinnochio! My fav childhood story heeee hawww...Congrad's on your win Light & Love

Kash Poet September 27, 2012 at 1:40 PM Beautiful verse by you Rhonda!Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 26, 2012 at 10:06 PM CONGRATS RHONDA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN .. ALWAYS WONDERFUL LUV ..

Carrie Richards September 26, 2012 at 3:01 PM This is lovely and has a breathlessness about it! Well done, Rhonda.!! And thank you once again for your recent contest ...was such fun to participate!

Ravi Sathasivam September 23, 2012 at 2:15 AM Lovely verses. Best wishes.tfs

Kash Poet September 23, 2012 at 1:57 AM Beautiful verse here Rhonda!Best wishes in the contest.

Russell Sivey September 22, 2012 at 8:50 PM I have to say it, Pinocchio! As that is his father's wish, to bring life to his wooden doll! I really enjoyed this very delightful write my friend! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!