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Precious Breath

Marionette, wooden smile desires life, precious breath, as father’s wish floats to heaven’s ear. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, September 22, 2012 for Nette Onclaud's SEPTOLET THE PUPPET Contest

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Date: 9/29/2012 12:47:00 AM
Rhonda , Congratulations, with your awesome entry in Nette's "SEPTOLET THE PUPPET" show.. I had fun following her contest... always~ PD
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Date: 9/28/2012 8:07:00 AM
Big conratulations Rhonda xx
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Date: 9/28/2012 5:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this "Septolet The Puppet" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2012 5:24:00 PM
Pinocchio. Lovely memories. Loved this one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/27/2012 5:12:00 PM
Great job...this is "precious"...congrats. BG
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Date: 9/27/2012 4:59:00 PM
ahhh, just like Pinnochio (can't spell it, but you know what I mean). This is precious. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:42:00 PM
Pinnochio! My fav childhood story heeee hawww...Congrad's on your win Light & Love
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:40:00 PM
Beautiful verse by you Rhonda!Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/26/2012 10:06:00 PM
CONGRATS RHONDA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN .. ALWAYS WONDERFUL LUV ..
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Date: 9/26/2012 3:01:00 PM
This is lovely and has a breathlessness about it! Well done, Rhonda.!! And thank you once again for your recent contest ...was such fun to participate!
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Date: 9/23/2012 2:15:00 AM
Lovely verses. Best wishes.tfs
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Date: 9/23/2012 1:57:00 AM
Beautiful verse here Rhonda!Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 9/22/2012 8:50:00 PM
I have to say it, Pinocchio! As that is his father's wish, to bring life to his wooden doll! I really enjoyed this very delightful write my friend! What a fabulous piece, Great Work!!
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