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Precious Blood Ran Down Its Legs

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I look at the tree in the morning. It does not bob nor weave. It knows the precious story. The one of Calvary. Its bark. Its bite. Its arteries and veins. One’s precious blood ran down its legs. It was cut from the soil. It was formed to curse. It endured the pound of the hammer. It held onto a precious life. Its bark. Its bite. Its arteries and veins. One’s precious blood ran down its legs. The soil remembered the blood of Abel. The soil remembered the blood of the prophets. Now, the soil is soaked in the blood of Christ. Not just another casualty, but a sweet redeemer. I look at the tree in the morning. It does not bob nor weave. It knows the precious story. The one of Calvary. If it had moved and missed the mark… …there’d be a crueler story. We’d all be history! Stable and firm in the sin-drenched world. Splintered and stained by the Word of God. From the beginning of us, our shame it held. There was a momentary pause. An angry sky. God the Father accepted the climatic sacrifice. I look at the tree in the morning. It does not bob nor weave. It knows the precious story. The one of Calvary. 6/4/2023

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Date: 6/5/2023 5:36:00 AM
beautiful & moving write indeed
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Date: 6/4/2023 6:24:00 PM
A stirring, uplifting write, Kim. The tree knows...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/5/2023 5:31:00 AM
Yes…thank you, Gershon!
Date: 6/4/2023 12:39:00 PM
Kim, your gripping poem well conveys the agony of our Lord, from the sad perspective of the tree. So well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2023 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend! :)
Date: 6/4/2023 12:34:00 PM
It's often said if trees could talk they'd have many a story to tell. Hope you're having a lovely weekend Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2023 2:24:00 PM
I love trees! God bless you, Tom! Have a wonderful weekend!

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