Preamble of Spring

Dawn of spring, of thaw and flowing streams
Winter may still hold the reins of a year in icy hands
But spring is moving in quietly and gently, 
An overture, an orchestra warming up
A symphony of awakening
The air is filled with expectancy and hope
In the stillness of the morning
Listen to the gurgling sound of water under ice
Listen to the seed pods of the creek bank's giant ash
Drop with a clicking sound upon the melting snow.
Above the pool, a chipmunk hurries over the snow like a yellow streak
Like a child drawing a crayon carelessly
Over a sprawling sheet of white
In this pause before spring, this preamble of song
Look for that delightful country hour
Ushered in over the voice of a redwing's flute
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Herzog Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 9:29 AM
Dear Carrie: How beautiful! You have created a special poem with your loving, descriptive words. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you enjoyed it. Love, Jancie Herzog xoxo
Austin Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 8:25 AM
Carrie, there are so many great images, sounds and scenes in this poem I can't even begin to describe my attentions. Certainly, this is one of my favorites. YOU ARE SOMETHIG ELSE! Love, daver
Strand Avatar
April 9, 2009 at 1:40 AM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Carrie.Rgds Brian
Devonshire Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 7:46 PM
A brilliant spring symphony, Carrie! Lovely images that bring life to the season. Good job!
Hudson Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 2:46 PM
I can hear the narrator of Disney reading your poem. I always watched The Wonderful World of Disney as a child on Sunday afternoons. The ones about nature and cute little cubs always amused me. You are very gifted in your perception and description. After today I won't be on regularly for a few months. Take care and God Bless-Always Alexandra
Higgins Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 9:22 AM
This is so well done Carrie....listen to the seed pods of the creek bank's giant ash...i really love that line...this is a very good write.
Strand Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 7:28 AM
Just love your intro Carrie and the beautiful last line.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words
Winter Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 6:34 AM
Ah, to be so surrounded by so much nature must be a constant inspiration, for it shows in your beautiful writing. And you are so in touch, it is a spiritual experience. Wonderfully contagious as you share it all with us. For I can sense it too, especially after reading you. Sigh. (There is construction going on down my block and lately the machinery is all I hear). Thanks for sharing such a beautiful Spring message. Love, Shar
P. Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 5:17 AM
Carrie ... this is so cute and fresh! each line and the imagery is so beautiful ... a very lovely spring! ~ Arany
Atanacio Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 4:56 AM
When? When? this morning we had a snow shower Carrie please when? will Spring hit here? Enough of me being selfish.. a well penned poem 10/10
Ginn Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 3:46 AM
We've had a pause 'in' spring. 70's a couple of days ago and snow yesterday. Everybody is totally freaked out and I just shake my head and say that's spring. Flirty and unpredictable. I rarely complain about the weather but 30s is so much colder after a few warm sun filled days. Where've you been lately kiddo?
Reynolds Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 2:37 AM
Ahhh, I can hear it, see it, feel it Carrie, beautifully depicted here, as in out my door. and as for our little picker (of which I just put on a couple of regular pics of her NOT picking her nose for your viewing pleasure!) we are, once again, in 9th place. :( It's probably because I can't offord to buy any of her cards right now, and everyone else is buying 'em up like crazy. my husband just lost his job...so...you know how it goes. anyway, thanks for your support, C - mucho love to you, K
Adams Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 8:19 PM
Beautiful poem filled with uplifting, vivid imagery.
Bingham Avatar
April 7, 2009 at 8:03 PM
I tried living in a cold climate a couple of times, but it always gave me cabin fever when the winter set in. I'm just an old Texas boy, born and raised and guess this is where I'll finish out my days. Enjoy the snow and the cold, your friend, Ron and God Bless
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