Pre Beatle Fame

Pre Beatles Fame 
 There are times when long time ago really is long, yet seen
with a cosmic sight, a speck of dust in the eye of the sky.  
I think it was In 1956 I saw the Beatles perform at a place 
called the cave in Liverpool. I was about seventeen worked 
as a mess boy on a ship, cleaning pots and pans in the galley.
 Back then the wages were low, yet we didn´t feel poor and
we had money for a pint of beer and a packet of woodbine,
potato crisp with a packed of salt inside...big deal.  

 Oh, shallow youth I found their music noisy and intrusive
I was trying to chat up a girl at the time, she was swaying
to the tune said the lyric was fantastic and I quickly agreed
became a fan overnight, yet never conquered her heart.
back on board - pubs closed early- I sat smoking cigarettes
listening to Hank William’s western music on the radio.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Collins Avatar
February 15, 2014 at 7:17 AM
I wanna hold your hand.
Bauer Avatar
February 13, 2014 at 3:52 PM
i love this story and was able to picture it all perfectly. very honest of you to admit that you found their music "noisy and intrusive!" great ending, too...
Hansen Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 3:44 AM
thank you iLene Bauer
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