Pre Beatle Fame

Pre Beatles Fame 
 There are times when long time ago really is long, yet seen
with a cosmic sight, a speck of dust in the eye of the sky.  
I think it was In 1956 I saw the Beatles perform at a place 
called the cave in Liverpool. I was about seventeen worked 
as a mess boy on a ship, cleaning pots and pans in the galley.
 Back then the wages were low, yet we didn´t feel poor and
we had money for a pint of beer and a packet of woodbine,
potato crisp with a packed of salt inside...big deal.  

 Oh, shallow youth I found their music noisy and intrusive
I was trying to chat up a girl at the time, she was swaying
to the tune said the lyric was fantastic and I quickly agreed
became a fan overnight, yet never conquered her heart.
back on board - pubs closed early- I sat smoking cigarettes
listening to Hank William’s western music on the radio.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 2/15/2014 7:17:00 AM
I wanna hold your hand.
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Date: 2/13/2014 3:52:00 PM
i love this story and was able to picture it all perfectly. very honest of you to admit that you found their music "noisy and intrusive!" great ending, too...
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Jan Oskar Hansen
Date: 2/14/2014 3:44:00 AM
thank you iLene Bauer
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