Pre-Write

Brainstorm The mind flashing Great ideas burst forth Excitement at a fever pitch ~ Lightning

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Alkas Poetry

Date: 6/16/2019 6:00:00 AM

This is creation, a divine particle God gave to us... and so FIAT LUX ! Salute dear Gershon alkas

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:34:00 AM

Thanks for teaching me the Latin for 'Y'hi Or,' which means the same in Hebrew. Appreciated the comment, Alkas. Best wishes, Gershon

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/15/2019 11:14:00 AM

Isn't it a great feeling - adrenaline runs through your body! Hugs, Jenny.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/16/2019 9:32:00 AM

Indeedy-doody it is, a wonderful feeling when that lightning strikes. ;) gw

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/14/2019 1:09:00 PM

Wow admirable word play in this brainwave great poem in brevity. Kudos poet! You may read my poems as well but Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem .

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/14/2019 2:46:00 PM

Appreciate your enthusiasm for this 'brainwave!' Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon