Praying For a Flat
The wheels
in the brain and round
go round and round
and round and round
and round and round
and round and round
and round o O and round
and round and round
and round and round
and round and round
and round go round
and round in the brain
The wheels
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This piece, I believe, is my finest shape poem to date. However simple, with the wheel there is an implied spinning motion, the hub providing a sense of a third dimension, and together they create the impression of an exasperated face~ stuck, in the "round and round and round..." of obsessive thought patterns.
Copyright © Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib | Year Posted 2018
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