Praying Mantis

Perched on a leaf in angelic pose
 (praying for a meal I suppose)
  It patiently awaits its prey
 And when a bee lands on a rose
 It is captured without delay

 With long legs and predatory precision
 enhanced by eyes with binocular vision
 They are  able to detect ultrasound 
 and can evade bats that hunt them down

 But mating can be a deadly game
 as the female often eats the male
 but she enjoys it just the same
her seduction never fails

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/18/2016 8:09:00 AM
Enjoyed your poem, Joseph! "Binocular vision" Congrats!
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Date: 9/17/2016 1:06:00 PM
Joseph, I really thought this entry was wonderfully written and in your second stanza learned something new about them detecting ultrasound! Congratulations on your win Joseph! : ) 7
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congrats Joseph on placing in the contest
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Date: 9/17/2016 12:24:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your fine placement in the contest, Joseph! Sandra
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Date: 8/17/2016 4:50:00 PM
Great poem, Joseph! You captured the life of the Praying Mantis very well, from 'angelic' to 'devilish'! Best wishes for the contest. 7 Sandra
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Date: 8/14/2016 4:57:00 PM
Very interesting, just like a black widow , a7 Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/14/2016 2:22:00 PM
- Interesting, Joseph ..... well written - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2016 12:56:00 PM
Hi Joseph, This is so descriptive. It's seem like you did your research. I wish you the best of in the contest. A Big seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 8/14/2016 10:41:00 AM
great description of a unique insect of our world!
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Date: 8/14/2016 9:17:00 AM
Ouch! What the poor fellow was praying for in the end killed him.
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Date: 8/13/2016 5:50:00 PM
Well written I enjoyed it very much x
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Date: 8/13/2016 1:19:00 PM
What fascinating facts .The final stanza made me smile Joseph :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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