Prayers Soft, Dim and Whispered

 
~~ Oh sweet the forest path where I always meet tranquility, Thoughts of peace that mingle with the sky above me; A king has created a forest circle, a ring so calm, An earthly realm, so heavenly and full of divinity and sanctity. I draw out my muse and ponder in awe my life, A princess born my parents tell me, now ageless is my spirit; Roses red stab my fingers and I have bled into the earth, And we the children of the world are free to find a path. With him, the king and with prayers, soft, dim and whispered. _______________________________ February 1, 2015 Poetry/Verse/Prayers Soft, Dim And Whispered Copyright Protected, ID 02-637-480-01 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Date: 2/4/2015 7:13:00 PM
It's so nice to read your verse this evening, Constance. [Check the rules hon, the words on her list below must be placed in second or 9th position & a word in the opposite position must rhyme with them]line 3 & line 6 of yours are correct- you must use the words -retreat,king,intelligence,school,strength, gem, princess, blessed, & light- Light & Love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/5/2015 7:01:00 AM
Also there is no syllable restriction or form restriction- just use those 9 words & rhyme another to them 1 per sentence.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 2/5/2015 7:00:00 AM
She highlighted them to show the position of the rhyming words [2nd & 9th] the ones I sent you must be used BUT they maybe used in 2nd or 9th position-in any of the lines 1-9-the word you rhyme them with is up to you.
Date: 2/4/2015 2:22:00 PM
Interesting work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like a winner to me...I am glad that I chose this one to read today.. Sara
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Date: 2/4/2015 8:08:00 AM
Very well penned with a passion that moves the reader to a deeper understanding of your relationship with God. Emile.
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:10:00 PM
Such a beautiful spiritual write, Broken Wing. Good luck in the contest. Eve
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Date: 2/3/2015 3:17:00 PM
this is just beautiful, Constance.
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Date: 2/2/2015 12:22:00 AM
Tranquility sancity beauty poetry. Another marvellous creation. a refection of you soul. Thank you for sharing. love Shane xxx 7 and into my fav's.
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Date: 2/1/2015 9:45:00 PM
I love these solitude moments . . . the sacrifice of blood, a path selected, you have been raised for this moment . . . tutored in reading the signs and listening to the wind . . . your prayers are being answer with each new step . . . so step boldly and love generously. 7
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