Constance La France Poet Verse

Prayers Soft, Dim and Whispered

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Oh sweet the forest path where I always meet tranquility,
Thoughts of peace that mingle with the sky above me;
A king has created a forest circle, a ring so calm,
An earthly realm, so heavenly and full of divinity and sanctity.

I draw out my muse and ponder in awe my life,
A princess born my parents tell me, now ageless is my spirit;
Roses red stab my fingers and I have bled into the earth,
And we the children of the world are free to find a path.

With him, the king and with prayers, soft, dim and whispered.


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February 1, 2015

Poetry/Verse/Prayers Soft, Dim And Whispered
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All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Debbie Guzzi February 4, 2015 at 7:13 PM It's so nice to read your verse this evening, Constance. [Check the rules hon, the words on her list below must be placed in second or 9th position & a word in the opposite position must rhyme with them]line 3 & line 6 of yours are correct- you must use the words -retreat,king,intelligence,school,strength, gem, princess, blessed, & light- Light & Love Debbie Guzzi February 5, 2015 at 7:01 AM Also there is no syllable restriction or form restriction- just use those 9 words & rhyme another to them 1 per sentence. Debbie Guzzi February 5, 2015 at 7:00 AM She highlighted them to show the position of the rhyming words [2nd & 9th] the ones I sent you must be used BUT they maybe used in 2nd or 9th position-in any of the lines 1-9-the word you rhyme them with is up to you.

Sara Kendrick February 4, 2015 at 2:22 PM Interesting work that you have penned for the contest..Reads like a winner to me...I am glad that I chose this one to read today.. Sara

Emile Pinet February 4, 2015 at 8:08 AM Very well penned with a passion that moves the reader to a deeper understanding of your relationship with God. Emile.

Eve Roper February 3, 2015 at 8:10 PM Such a beautiful spiritual write, Broken Wing. Good luck in the contest. Eve

Jack Horne February 3, 2015 at 3:17 PM this is just beautiful, Constance.

Shane Cooper February 2, 2015 at 12:22 AM Tranquility sancity beauty poetry. Another marvellous creation. a refection of you soul. Thank you for sharing. love Shane xxx 7 and into my fav's.

David Meade February 1, 2015 at 9:45 PM I love these solitude moments . . . the sacrifice of blood, a path selected, you have been raised for this moment . . . tutored in reading the signs and listening to the wind . . . your prayers are being answer with each new step . . . so step boldly and love generously. 7