Notes About The Poem

Prayer To Wonder

To encounter you in Cleveland
as if an angel drew my steps
into the intricate re-enactment of
an  Amazonian forest
A glass tank with a caption that  reads,
"Long- necked South American Turtle"
 
After intense staring into irridescent shallows
your shape emerges as a living abstract;
 a turtle-seemingly carved from an
ancient  tree bough,
your long neck, the gnarled branch:
your body an elongated burl
 
Nearby, a sloth, in an emotion
like sleep, does a slow motion spiral
down a vine clad tree
A creature (my memory refuses to name)
like a crazed artichoke
returns in endless typewriter movements 
Eyes glazed, despairing of escape
 
I am drawn, mesmerized back to the
 tank with its oneness of stone and log,
breathing a silent prayer to wonder.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hicks Avatar
April 25, 2020 at 1:34 PM
I liked how surreal this felt, with the varied strange creatures about at the aquarium. But what really drew me in is your curious (and original) uses of expression that I've never read before like "crazed artichoke" and "typewriter movements" ... I love to be caught off guard with unexpected (often zany) connections!
Mcconnell Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 2:37 PM
Lovely penning displayed here SuZ, great imagery and insightful thought too. Have a great weekend,Gordon
Delaney Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:58 PM
Thanks Gordon...I appreciate you reading and leaving a comment for me. SuZ
Brewer Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 9:06 PM
Mesmerising descriptive observation, brilliantly put in words. Well done, Suzanne.
Delaney Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 7:51 PM
Thanks Geoffrey: Happy t have you visit and thanks so much for your thoughts.
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 7:22 AM
Wonderful memories you depicted immortalizing the long neck turtle--loved the details and imagery. Happy festive season to you SuZ.
Delaney Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Sorry for my late reply. I always appreciate having you visit. SuZ
Faulkner Avatar
November 27, 2019 at 6:36 PM
I love turtles, this is intriguing, an enjoyable read, Suzanne-
Delaney Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Michelle: Thanks for your kind words. Hugs, SuZ
Lamoureux Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 9:13 AM
This is cool, I have never seen a turtle with such a long neck. ;0) your poem and photo made me smile.
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:56 PM
So happy you enjoyed this one Rich.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 6:25 AM
Wonderful poem - God bless you with many more, Gina
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Such a lovely comment. Thanks for the good wishes,
Andresen Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 4:06 AM
- It had a really long neck ... a lovely poem, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 4:28 AM
Strange how animals get different adaptations depending on the continents they evolve from. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. Hugs, SuZ
Na Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 9:43 PM
Hi Suzanne. Nice sediment towards turtles. This is good, great choice of words. Thanks for sharing this
Delaney Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 4:31 AM
Glad you enjoyed, Always nice to immerse ourselves in nature. Best, SuZ
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