Banjo Casto Poet Tanka

Prayer Tanka

eve of devotion 

   inspires an intimate plea

 entwined in its notes

       prayers wrapped in light music...

sealing hearts' intercession




Contest of Amy Green
Tanka(s) Contest REVISED, EASIER, more FREE
Apr 21, 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire April 29, 2014 at 2:34 PM Very lovely poem, Banjo. Congratulations on your win! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick April 28, 2014 at 11:16 AM Expressive lines form this winning tanka..Way to go ..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson April 27, 2014 at 7:35 PM Nicely done. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich April 27, 2014 at 7:04 PM very nice one for imagery . Congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 27, 2014 at 7:33 AM A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Banjo

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 27, 2014 at 2:34 AM Great write Banjo n a great well deserved win ! Congrats !

Poet Destroyer A April 27, 2014 at 1:53 AM Banjo, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA