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Prayer For the Bahamas

With broken hearts we turn to You
Our tears cannot help those in need
To countless souls we bid adieu
And hope You listen as we plead

Bahamians need Your blessing
While they try to rebuild their homes
Dorian still keeps them guessing
As through the streets the homeless roam

Take pity on this island nation
Where families lost all they had
Starving, hopeless in devastation
Many still missing, and all so sad

If Dorian’s swift, salty surge
Carried many souls out to sea
Please help their families emerge
Stronger in the Isle of Free

For from the states some slaves escaped
To build better lives in Freeport
Blankets of flowers are now draped
On coffins bearing lives cut short




Written September 13, 2019
For Regina Riddle’s “Write a Psalm” Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Awtry Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 10:10 AM
heart rending situation. Beautiful prayer. Glad I happened upon this today and I know that long after the story leaves the news it is still a desperate situation. Praying for them today because I read your poem. <3
Cunningham Avatar
October 1, 2019 at 9:37 AM
A beautiful prayer from the heart Carolyn, congratulations on your win. Tom
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:40 AM
So pleased to see this one being honoured.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 4:49 AM
- Congratulations, Carolyn :) - Well deserved a first place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:28 AM
Carolyn, I am so happy to see this favorite of mine be honored with First Place. It is very deserving! Congratulations! : ) xxoo
Mcintosh Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Congratulations on a beautifully written poem. Bless you always
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:35 PM
Thank you, Regina. It seems so unfair that the descendants of slaves are now struggling to rebuild their lives.
Hamilton Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 9:13 PM
Wonderful write Carolyn congrats on a fine win!
Horne Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:57 AM
love this heartfelt write
Theraven Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:16 AM
Carolyn, Prayers for those missing, prayers for the survivors. I hope for the light to return and shine bright for the people in the Bahamian Islands. From Abaco Island to Yellow Cay. I wish the same for the other areas impacted by disaster this long season. -Richard
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:38 PM
We're halfway through the six-month hurricane season now. Perhaps the U.S. will be spared major damage this year, though there has been flooding in Texas and even some pockets of flooding in Florida. It's the win that topples homes.
Proxenos Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 10:45 AM
A Disastrous event, devastation death and distraught people - you describe this terrible disaster with heartfelt passion Carolyn, people all over the world wept for these sorry souls - a sad but wonderful write which is described with immense kindness and intense feeling. Your poem brought tears to my eyes. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 2:37 PM
The extreme devastation and loss emanates sadly and poignantly from your words. This is beautifully written Carolyn. They are in my prayers for healing from such devastating loss. This poem is a Fave for me my friend! xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2019 at 9:53 AM
I add my prayers. This is a thoughtful and important piece. Hugs Rick.
Adams Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 7:46 PM
even in its poignancy this is an excellent penned plea...such a tragedy, if anyone needs prayers right now, it's them...great poem! Hugs
Raven Avatar
September 16, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Hi Carolyn, this is an excellent, yet sad poem on the devastation in the Bahamas. What a terrible event. Your words move me to tears as I think on this sorrowful situation. This one does read like a winner. A Psalm that should be read. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX
Devonshire Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Thank you, Vladislav. I'll check your page.
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:28 PM
This is a very moving poem, Carolyn. You have a most generous spirit. I think you chose very well your psalm theme.
Devonshire Avatar
September 17, 2019 at 4:29 PM
It is heartwarming to see various nations coming together to provide support to the people in the Bahamas. Thanks for reading, Andrea.
One Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Amen... touching poetry
Hinshaw Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:33 PM
Amen, Carolyn! - Well said. I hope the US and other nations jump in to provide quick aid. Glad to see you back on soup and thanks for your kind comments on this and other verses I've posted on soup recently - Bob
Ball Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 1:39 PM
A very poignant piece my friend. I been through many hurricanes and they are frightening. Great job. God Bless,. JB
Michael Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 8:08 PM
I like the compassion of the write...Well done
Laurie Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 6:52 PM
Hello Carolyn … nicely written and rhymed Caroline and you showed much compassion for the devastated victims of another natural disaster - thank you Carolyn - Lindsay
Leffanta Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 4:13 PM
How very unpatriotic! Don't your read Trump tweets? The most important thing right now is not anyone's life nor health nor comfort; all the matters is Trump's Vanity Wall is erected in a timely manner! There lies the Riddle for Regina to solve! Good luck! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:05 PM
I don't have to read the tweets. They're read each night by newscasters :) I wish we could stop talking about the wall until Mexico agrees to pay for it. Thanks for reading!
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 3:41 PM
what a wonderful idea for a psalm Carolyn, may they soon get the aid and help they so desperately need to be able to rebuild shattered lives and start all over again:-( hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Jan, before I saw Regina's contest, I was going to have a contest for poetic prayers for the Bahamas. Many groups here are collecting money and supplies for the victims. Just wish the president would allow storm victims to enter our country temporarily without visas. Women and children are being turned away.
May Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 3:38 PM
WOW!!
Pandit Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 2:06 PM
A prayer in your words Carolyn..for the victims of this tragedy..so well expressed! All the best.
Andresen Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 1:54 PM
- A terrible tragedy ... beautifully written, Carolyn - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) ... Have a lovely weekend :)
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