Pray For Rain


When heaven is shut up, and there is no rain,
because they have sinned against thee; if they
pray toward this place, and confess thy name,
and turn from their sin ...
Then hear thou in heaven, and forgive the 
sin of thy servants ... and give rain upon the land
1 Kings 8:35 - 36



The land is parched,
there has been no rain in over a year
The river is bone dry,
forecast says the skies will remain clear

The cattle are dying,
as are all the crops
You’re bleeding credit,
and still no sign of any raindrops

It is for certain,
a famine is afoot
The sky’s an iron curtain,
all of your savings are took
The eyes of the wife and kids,
have an empty, fatalistic look
And you cry, 
because you don’t understand why

You’ve done all you can,
you even sold your best gun
Listen to the barren land,
you’ve left something undone

That holy book on the top shelf
covered in cobwebs and dust
Better open it while you’re able,
even better, in it start to trust

Although you never once 
stopped praying for rain
Is it the right prayer that you’re asking?
Everyday you pray for rain,
so you can go on living
But you never asked once 
to have your sins forgiven

Pray for rain
Pray for understanding
Pray for rain
Pray for forgiveness too

Go back to your first love,
your God, whom you abandoned
like an ungodly fool
Then say your prayers,
asking God to have mercy on you



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/22/2017 10:39:00 AM
Now, pray for the rain to end.
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Date: 8/6/2017 10:18:00 AM
Excellent poem Freddie. Very well written truth :)
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Date: 8/6/2017 9:35:00 AM
Powerful write, Freddie. You speak the truth. Reminds me of this verse: If my people, which are called by my name, shall humble themselves, pray and seek my face and turn from their wicked ways, then I will hear from heaven, and will heal their land. (2 Chronicles 7:14)
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Date: 8/6/2017 9:32:00 AM
Good morning Freddie. I 'll be the first to ask God for mercy. I enjoyed your poem...Have a wonderful day my friend
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