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Prancing Through Midnight Fire

Prancing through midnight fire
I called my soul to surrender
She laughed
Diabolically

Shocked at my daring
and my failure to train myself
even in death, I pulled out the big guns
Plastering her with truth in leaden forms

She refused to comply
Making me angry, but also
infuriating me, as I was losing her respect
Which was the only thing I thought I would have in the end

Silly me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/16/2019 10:31:00 PM
This creation is both up-in-Heaven and down-to-earth at the same time. I don't know how else to explain it... other than I really like the contentiousness, the battle----and the conclusion too. Great one, Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2019 12:39:00 AM
Thank you Gershon. I trust your week has been terrific. Mine has!
Date: 4/15/2019 11:20:00 PM
I think sometimes Self is one of the hardest things to train in the world (with the possible exception of a husband ;P)...
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/16/2019 3:07:00 PM
And what about cats? They are too haughty to train.
Date: 4/14/2019 2:05:00 PM
Inner turmoil is what makes us human. A battle worth fighting, Have a great day,
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/15/2019 12:15:00 AM
Thank you David; you also have a wonderful day!