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Pranayama Breath

Take a deep breath and fill your heart with calm.
battling the powerful waves every night,
trying to detect a glimmer of light,
life hurts; I need time to heal from life's qualms.
fighting while everyone witnessed the psalm
all I want for Grace is a glint of sight.
take a deep breath.

I was glad to be in the rhythm of balm.
flickering senseless claws brimming with spite
clung to a shard of hope, I stand to fight.
off from deep facts when I want to embalm
take a deep breath...

Written: October 12, 2022

Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser

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Linda Alice Fowler November 22, 2022 at 7:19 AM Congratulations on your win Lasaad! :)

Andrea Dietrich November 21, 2022 at 3:02 PM Congrats on your win, great job.

Terry Miller November 21, 2022 at 6:56 AM What an opening line, and it just flowed through a wonderful rondine

Unseeking Seeker October 13, 2022 at 6:22 PM Powerful opening line and superb right through ~ enjoyed

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 13, 2022 at 12:24 PM Your beautiful poem evokes such calm feelings and positive thoughts, Lasaad. The picture makes a lovely companion. :)

Vijay Pandit October 13, 2022 at 5:21 AM Awesome colors in your photo. Soothing words and a sense of peace you convey my friend.

Supraja Kannan October 13, 2022 at 3:14 AM This is so beautiful...so relaxing too... Thanks for sharing such a soothing poetry...

Victor Buhagiar October 13, 2022 at 1:17 AM Sunset makes roses increase their fragrance. I am addicted to them.

Michael Tor October 12, 2022 at 6:52 PM Love this Lasaad hope resonates with the flower trying to overcome as we also. A favorite my friend...

Eve Roper October 12, 2022 at 5:59 PM Love the verse , Lasaad. I try to take those deep breaths when I am stirred with emotions, but so hard.