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Take a deep breath and fill your heart with calm. battling the powerful waves every night, trying to detect a glimmer of light, life hurts; I need time to heal from life's qualms. fighting while everyone witnessed the psalm all I want for Grace is a glint of sight. take a deep breath. I was glad to be in the rhythm of balm. flickering senseless claws brimming with spite clung to a shard of hope, I stand to fight. off from deep facts when I want to embalm take a deep breath...
Written: October 12, 2022 Rousing Rondine Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jeff Kyser

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Date: 11/22/2022 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Lasaad! :)
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Date: 11/21/2022 3:02:00 PM
Congrats on your win, great job.
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Date: 11/21/2022 6:56:00 AM
What an opening line, and it just flowed through a wonderful rondine
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Date: 10/13/2022 6:22:00 PM
Powerful opening line and superb right through ~ enjoyed
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Date: 10/13/2022 12:24:00 PM
Your beautiful poem evokes such calm feelings and positive thoughts, Lasaad. The picture makes a lovely companion. :)
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Date: 10/13/2022 5:21:00 AM
Awesome colors in your photo. Soothing words and a sense of peace you convey my friend.
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Date: 10/13/2022 3:14:00 AM
This is so beautiful...so relaxing too... Thanks for sharing such a soothing poetry...
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Date: 10/13/2022 1:17:00 AM
Sunset makes roses increase their fragrance. I am addicted to them.
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Date: 10/12/2022 6:52:00 PM
Love this Lasaad hope resonates with the flower trying to overcome as we also. A favorite my friend...
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Date: 10/12/2022 5:59:00 PM
Love the verse , Lasaad. I try to take those deep breaths when I am stirred with emotions, but so hard.
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