David Brown Poet Haiku

Prairie Passion

we move together 
like horse and rider flying
across the prairie

urging each other
tenderly whipping passion
into the sunset

we are as though one
slowly now cantering home
'til we ride again

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Jan Allison April 7, 2015 at 3:39 PM what a passionate string of haiku David - I enjoyed the ride! hugs jan xx David Brown April 7, 2015 at 8:12 PM Thank you dear Jan, your comments are always appreciated.

Eileen Manassian April 7, 2015 at 2:50 PM :) Lovely...Slowly cantering home after satiation is sweet. David Brown April 7, 2015 at 8:11 PM Thank you my friend, the appreciation of one so gifted in writing on the subject is also sweet...David

Jaycee Cervenka April 7, 2015 at 2:03 PM Love'd the imagery of this! Very nice string of haiku (Choka?) This Texas girl loves the prairie wisdom, and the venacular used! Great job. ~jan David Brown April 7, 2015 at 2:48 PM Thank you so much for the kind words, Jan. Being far (decidedly coastal) from a prairie guy, I am very happy to get your feedback. Look forward to reading your work....David