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Prairie Passion

we move together like horse and rider flying across the prairie urging each other tenderly whipping passion into the sunset we are as though one slowly now cantering home 'til we ride again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/7/2015 3:39:00 PM
what a passionate string of haiku David - I enjoyed the ride! hugs jan xx
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David Brown
Date: 4/7/2015 8:12:00 PM
Thank you dear Jan, your comments are always appreciated.
Date: 4/7/2015 2:50:00 PM
:) Lovely...Slowly cantering home after satiation is sweet.
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David Brown
Date: 4/7/2015 8:11:00 PM
Thank you my friend, the appreciation of one so gifted in writing on the subject is also sweet...David
Date: 4/7/2015 2:03:00 PM
Love'd the imagery of this! Very nice string of haiku (Choka?) This Texas girl loves the prairie wisdom, and the venacular used! Great job. ~jan
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David Brown
Date: 4/7/2015 2:48:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words, Jan. Being far (decidedly coastal) from a prairie guy, I am very happy to get your feedback. Look forward to reading your work....David

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