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Perfect Playmate puny pink primrose pursuing phantom pleasure pecking playful puff Quitter queasy queen questions quirky quail's quivery quacks - quill quietly quit Ride rain rake rattling raft river roared ravenously - rider relished ride First Place in STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (10) any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brain Strand

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/27/2020 5:49:00 AM

WOW: I love these Jenish: Perfectly playful poetry. May give it a try but not promising a thing LOL, SuZ

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/27/2020 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Suzanne for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/25/2020 8:54:00 PM

Excellent Approach. Congrats.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/26/2020 12:47:00 AM

Thank you for your support Anisha..

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/24/2020 3:50:00 AM

Thanks for sharing these... both forms and contents excellently exemplify what your contest requires. God bless you.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/24/2020 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Beata for your support.. Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 4:58:00 PM

ok, you are calling it 5/7/5 poems. Now I get it!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/22/2020 9:45:00 PM

Yes Andrea.. Both Haiku and Senryu poems accepted..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 4:08:00 PM

how cool these are. Can we do haiku?? Or was it any kind of poem? If it's haiku, I think that will be so fun. thanks for this awesome model.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/22/2020 9:44:00 PM

Thank you Andrea for your support..

Constance La France

Date: 7/18/2020 7:01:00 PM

Jenish, love your examples, these will be hard to beat in your contest _Constance

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/18/2020 11:41:00 PM

Thank you Constance..

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2020 7:53:00 AM

amazing alliteration!! will try and think of poems for your contest but my muse is missing:-( hugs jan xx

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/18/2020 11:41:00 PM

Missing muse will fly around when your pen touches paper.. Thank you Jan..

Jcb Brul

Date: 7/17/2020 8:25:00 AM

Superb alliteration!! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!!

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/18/2020 11:39:00 PM

Thank you JCB..

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 7/17/2020 1:51:00 AM

Thank you, Jenish. I did not realise how many forms of poetry there are until i read yours. I have attempted to write an alliteration with your clever one as a guide. (are they all written in alphabetic form?) Please excuse my ignorance. I hope you don't mind my asking you. Foggy brains come with old age....Thank you, Jenish....

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/18/2020 11:39:00 PM

Thank you Shirley.. I'm happy you liked it.. Have a great day..

Eve Roper

Date: 7/15/2020 11:52:00 PM

awesome alterations, Jenish,

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/16/2020 3:08:00 AM

Thank you Eve..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/15/2020 8:20:00 PM

Alliterative allegories always an amazing addition and arguably astonishingly angelic! Whew! You and I are now officially 'Haiku Harrys!' Cheers, Gershon

Jenish Somadas
Date: 7/16/2020 3:08:00 AM

lol... Hahaha.. You are too good Gershon..