Jenish Somadas Poet Alliteration

Pqr

Perfect Playmate

puny pink primrose
pursuing phantom pleasure 
pecking playful puff

Quitter

queasy queen questions
quirky quail's quivery quacks -
quill quietly quit

Ride

rain rake rattling raft
river roared ravenously -
rider relished ride


First Place in STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (10) any theme any form Poetry Contest sponsored by Brain Strand

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Suzanne Delaney July 27, 2020 at 5:49 AM WOW: I love these Jenish: Perfectly playful poetry. May give it a try but not promising a thing LOL, SuZ Jenish Somadas July 27, 2020 at 5:55 AM Thank you Suzanne for your delightful comment.. Have a great day..

Anisha Dutta July 25, 2020 at 8:54 PM Excellent Approach. Congrats. Jenish Somadas July 26, 2020 at 12:47 AM Thank you for your support Anisha..

Beata Agustin July 24, 2020 at 3:50 AM Thanks for sharing these... both forms and contents excellently exemplify what your contest requires. God bless you. Jenish Somadas July 24, 2020 at 6:01 AM Thank you Beata for your support.. Have a great day..

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 4:58 PM ok, you are calling it 5/7/5 poems. Now I get it! Jenish Somadas July 22, 2020 at 9:45 PM Yes Andrea.. Both Haiku and Senryu poems accepted..

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2020 at 4:08 PM how cool these are. Can we do haiku?? Or was it any kind of poem? If it's haiku, I think that will be so fun. thanks for this awesome model. Jenish Somadas July 22, 2020 at 9:44 PM Thank you Andrea for your support..

Constance La France July 18, 2020 at 7:01 PM Jenish, love your examples, these will be hard to beat in your contest _Constance Jenish Somadas July 18, 2020 at 11:41 PM Thank you Constance..

Jan Allison July 18, 2020 at 7:53 AM amazing alliteration!! will try and think of poems for your contest but my muse is missing:-( hugs jan xx Jenish Somadas July 18, 2020 at 11:41 PM Missing muse will fly around when your pen touches paper.. Thank you Jan..

JC Brul July 17, 2020 at 8:25 AM Superb alliteration!! Congratulations on your TOP WIN!! Jenish Somadas July 18, 2020 at 11:39 PM Thank you JCB..

Shirley Hawkins July 17, 2020 at 1:51 AM Thank you, Jenish. I did not realise how many forms of poetry there are until i read yours. I have attempted to write an alliteration with your clever one as a guide. (are they all written in alphabetic form?) Please excuse my ignorance. I hope you don't mind my asking you. Foggy brains come with old age....Thank you, Jenish.... Jenish Somadas July 18, 2020 at 11:39 PM Thank you Shirley.. I'm happy you liked it.. Have a great day..

Eve Roper July 15, 2020 at 11:52 PM awesome alterations, Jenish, Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:08 AM Thank you Eve..

Gershon Wolf July 15, 2020 at 8:20 PM Alliterative allegories always an amazing addition and arguably astonishingly angelic! Whew! You and I are now officially 'Haiku Harrys!' Cheers, Gershon Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:08 AM lol... Hahaha.. You are too good Gershon..

Panagiota Romios July 15, 2020 at 4:49 PM How poetic, Jenish. Panagiota Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:07 AM Thank you Panagiota..

Darlene De Beaulieu July 15, 2020 at 2:10 PM Hello Jenish Somadas, very clever. Are all Alteration done this way? Thank you. enjoy your day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu July 16, 2020 at 5:45 PM Hello jenish Somadas, I will give it a try. Enjoy your evening my friend. Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:07 AM Thank you Darlene.. You try the next three,..

Demetrios Trifiatis July 15, 2020 at 7:54 AM Masterfully done dearest, Jenish! Impressive my friend. Blessings! Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:06 AM Thank you Demetrios..

Vijay Pandit July 15, 2020 at 7:22 AM Skillfully rendered, Jenish--your alliteration paints the photo in your words. Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:05 AM Thank you Vijay..

Tom Cunningham July 15, 2020 at 4:16 AM Perfect alliteration Jenish, well composed. Tom Jenish Somadas July 16, 2020 at 3:05 AM Thank you Tom for your support..