Powerful Shower

It's difficult
for anything to grow
in completely dry ground
hard earth crusted over 
gritty like sandpaper
abrasive
yet crumbling
at mere touch
unable to hold together
or support weight

Yet rain doesn't always
help that much
when it's too hard
or too fast
or not long enough to last

The best help of all
is a gentle sprinkle
now and then
or a slow steady shower
to soak things in

Our minds are made
like that, too
ideas carefully
firmly planted
can't take root
in dry destitution

Even ideas
of the hardiest constitution
will wither away
and decay in our brains
without that simple
life-giving rain
a gentle shower
of information
knowledge
truly is power

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Date: 12/28/2018 5:52:00 PM
So simultaneously gentle and strong, so glad I found this among your gems, my friend!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/29/2018 7:00:00 AM
Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it! ;)
Date: 12/7/2018 5:59:00 AM
Beautifully penned, flows smoothly and speaks the truth. I had to "fav" this one, as I want to be able to read it again and again.
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/7/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you so much! It is always such an honor to have a poem FAVed!! ;)
Date: 12/6/2018 6:31:00 PM
wonderful anology you did. I sure enjoyed this,
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/6/2018 6:33:00 PM
Thank you- I'm so glad! ;)
Date: 12/5/2018 2:10:00 PM
Well done! I hope all the soupers bad-mouthing each other can understand it! Aloha! Rico
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/14/2018 4:54:00 AM
If (or when) you see more of those bad-mouthing 'Soupers... feel free to direct them to my article on the subject: https://www.poetrysoup.com/article/dont_be_a_poem-panner!-1988
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/5/2018 4:02:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! (It's so sad that people are creating that kind of environment here...) Aloha!
Date: 12/5/2018 6:22:00 AM
A lovely write my friend...showers are needed outside and within...love & light...^WW^
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 12/5/2018 6:43:00 AM
Very true... thank you, my friend! ;)
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