Powerful Shower

It's difficult
for anything to grow
in completely dry ground
hard earth crusted over 
gritty like sandpaper
abrasive
yet crumbling
at mere touch
unable to hold together
or support weight

Yet rain doesn't always
help that much
when it's too hard
or too fast
or not long enough to last

The best help of all
is a gentle sprinkle
now and then
or a slow steady shower
to soak things in

Our minds are made
like that, too
ideas carefully
firmly planted
can't take root
in dry destitution

Even ideas
of the hardiest constitution
will wither away
and decay in our brains
without that simple
life-giving rain
a gentle shower
of information
knowledge
truly is power
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:52 PM
So simultaneously gentle and strong, so glad I found this among your gems, my friend!
Mcferran Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 7:00 AM
Thank you, so glad you enjoyed it! ;)
Kiser Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 5:59 AM
Beautifully penned, flows smoothly and speaks the truth. I had to "fav" this one, as I want to be able to read it again and again.
Mcferran Avatar
December 7, 2018 at 6:03 AM
Thank you so much! It is always such an honor to have a poem FAVed!! ;)
Dietrich Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:31 PM
wonderful anology you did. I sure enjoyed this,
Mcferran Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Thank you- I'm so glad! ;)
Leffanta Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 2:10 PM
Well done! I hope all the soupers bad-mouthing each other can understand it! Aloha! Rico
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December 14, 2018 at 4:54 AM
If (or when) you see more of those bad-mouthing 'Soupers... feel free to direct them to my article on the subject: https://www.poetrysoup.com/article/dont_be_a_poem-panner!-1988
Mcferran Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Thank you, my friend! (It's so sad that people are creating that kind of environment here...) Aloha!
Warrior Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:22 AM
A lovely write my friend...showers are needed outside and within...love & light...^WW^
Mcferran Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:43 AM
Very true... thank you, my friend! ;)
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