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Power of a Storm

Dark clouds billow overhead, creating a landscape of gray. A veil shadows slowly spread, in the air, a misty sea spray. Hazy dim light filters through, adding no color to the day. The sea and sky, no trace of blue, leaving only a dreary display. In the darkest part of the night, a sea storm touched land. In the sky, flashes of light, illuminating beach and sand. Rolling thunder, crashing waves, came together, creating a roar. Occurring when nature misbehaves, and echoes the sounds of war. After an hour, the storm finally died, but leaving something to remind. Its effects are seen, island wide, proof of its power, left behind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 5/18/2021 12:12:00 PM
Wow you have portrayed the wild noisy storm in all its power in awesome rhyming and i grinned at the 'nature misbehaves' line, cool!! Kudos for this fantastic poem. -------------->>>>>>>>><<<<<<<<< Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 4/15/2021 7:51:00 PM
Your Poem, certainly does leave a thought behind also Sandra, love the rhyme and flow here.
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Date: 4/12/2021 2:12:00 PM
Wow . It sounds like a powerful storm. Well described. I hope all is ok. :)
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 4/13/2021 7:11:00 AM
All is well. Thank you Heidi.
Date: 4/12/2021 11:35:00 AM
Hello Sandra Weiss, water is so strong in a storm. Dose a lot of damage. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/13/2021 10:29:00 AM
You do the same Brenda. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 4/13/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Darlene. Take care.
Date: 4/12/2021 11:27:00 AM
Well done! Aloha! Rico
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Sandra L. Weiss
Date: 4/13/2021 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Rico. Aloha!

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