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Power and Peace

One tiny drop, vulnerable
Evaporation possible
Accumulation masterful
Raging wall ,mountain moving
Energy eased
Calm, life giving.

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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

October 29, 2015 at 1:59 PM

Excellent poem.

Hannington Mumo

October 28, 2015 at 10:38 AM

I thoroughly like the powerful expression you exhibit with a subtle economy of words. Kudos! 7!

Oliver Krier

October 28, 2015 at 10:29 AM

Hello! I dislike the word powerful. I like your poem anyhow? This seems harnessed. Balance of an overused word.

Robert Lindley

October 28, 2015 at 8:01 AM

Enjoyed this look at life's potential. Welcome to the Soup.....

Rob Bettridge

October 25, 2015 at 8:53 AM

I enjoyed your poem which flowed with moving liquidity. Rob xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 22, 2015 at 3:22 AM

- Hello Kathie :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathie Shank

October 23, 2015 at 10:26 PM

Thank you for your warm welcome. I am excited about sharing time with you in this community.

Poet Destroyer A

October 21, 2015 at 12:06 AM

Hi Kathie, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

October 19, 2015 at 11:17 PM

Kathie, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kathie Shank

October 23, 2015 at 10:35 PM

Thanks. I haven't really written my own poetry but taught it to children as a teacher of 33 years. I don't think a lot of people know that once they're comfortable with it children love writing poetry even the boys some of which were way more enthusiastic than the girls. Though they were the ones writing I got to help with the creative process guiding them. One of my absolute favorite teaching activities.

Andrea Dietrich

October 19, 2015 at 6:22 PM

this is so cool. Kind of like a metaphor for a soul! Or just how we expend our energy. Welcome to Soup, I get to be your first comment!! Keep visiting others and you will see more and more.

Kathie Shank

October 23, 2015 at 10:27 PM

Thanks Andrea. I'm glad you got to be my first comment also. I very much enjoy your poetry.

Power and Peace

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