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It is hot as blazes in Chicago today, my friends ...

Crack open the front door Oh so gingerly Extend your neck Chin thrust forward Your nose edges out...side POW! YOU ARE RAMMED! By a Wall Of the hottest air This Side of Hell Tuck your chin back in...side Wince ... once Wince ... twice Blink salty tears stream down your face Your January Dream come true!

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Date: 7/28/2018 11:52:00 AM
Ah, cool write, Gershon. Me love the hot weather, but I gotta do what you intimated in this warm write. Stay frosty on the inside tip. lol! Sorry for not stopping by lately ... my bad. As for the weather ... I dread the heat far less than the frigid. I'm not saying ... I'm just saying. Ha, ha ... ha. Outstanding free verse poetry. Love waves give smiles and smiles of joy.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2018 10:20:00 PM
Your comment is worth its weight in gold, my friend. Thank you so much!! ~ Gershon
Date: 7/15/2018 4:17:00 PM
It's projected to hit near 100 today and that is not fun, could relate! Hope you're keeping cool!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/29/2018 10:21:00 PM
---as the proverbial cucumber! :) gw
Date: 7/14/2018 1:48:00 AM
MHmm, shame we can't do a temperature exchange programme between hemispheres.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/14/2018 11:35:00 PM
Agreed! ~ gw
Date: 7/13/2018 8:52:00 PM
Chuckles <3
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