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August 30, 2023

Contest : Pour Your Heart Out

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Pouring the Heart Out

In the splendorous sky of my ardent heart, you sparkled like the sequins of the moon. As I suffused your sapphire sheen to attune, my heart turned into shimmering indigo art. It became the horizon of the nascent dawn, from its chromatic palette a new day arose. All its colors the dream brush fervently chose for my heart’s canvas with sunburst love drawn. In the rhythm of spring zephyr my heart swayed, the rippling tune resonated with its sonorous beat. Its captivating cadence had never been so sweet, it morphed into romantic music for me to serenade. I painted my heart with the patina of the scarlet sky, like dew-drenched petals of my love’s garden rose, where I saw the facsimile of your florid face repose, wafted by the wooing wings of my heart’s butterfly. Draped by the silver sheen of dancing moondust hue, my heart became the crescendo of ecstasy symphony. Floating in the melody of stellar song you came to me, mesmeric motif of my moonshine heart adorned you.
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Date: 10/2/2023 7:58:00 AM
Enclosed rhymes are difficult ..with your word power so smooth the stream flows ...As usual you win in your exotic brilliant pouring of heart
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/2/2023 10:00:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment on my humble effort.
Date: 10/1/2023 5:07:00 PM
This should be ranked higher. it is a luscious, vivid, cheescake of a read. Loved its richness. Congrats on 10th place out of 75 entries!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/2/2023 9:59:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, and for the comment.
Date: 8/30/2023 12:49:00 AM
Very visual.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/2/2023 9:59:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and comment.
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