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Just One Poetry Contest   Sponsored by Sara Kendrick  Fifth Place

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Pouring Bubbly

white wine beer mixer
                                 sunrise awaits, raindrops spritz~
                                     poor mans champagne joy
                                                                       #4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Kimmy!
Kendrick Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 1:59 AM
Congratulations on your winning work in my contest. I appreciate you participating. Sara
Anaya Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:20 PM
Thank you, Sara. I am delighted with my placement, and look forward to your challenging contests! xhugs Anaya
Fowler Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Congratulations Anaya! See what a little improvisation can do?!! :)
Anaya Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:21 PM
I made the list, and a challenge, Linda. Thank you for the congrats! xhugs
Goldsmith Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Pouring Bubbly" is a fun write/picture. Have a fun/great day............
Anaya Avatar
August 10, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you, Paula!
Kauffman Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 11:18 AM
Anaya, your haiku sparkles likes bubbles of champagne rolling off the tongue! Delightful as champagne itself. A toast to your creative muse! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!!
Anaya Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 9:16 PM
Your cheers are very welcome Sam, I do like bubbly, Cheers Anaya!
Puddifoot Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 7:54 AM
the three required words are nicely incorporated into this haiku - i particularly like "raindrops spritz" :)
Anaya Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Thank you, Charlotte! Heavens dewy gift, I worked with what was given.True story!
Chircop Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Lovely Haiku
Anaya Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 3:16 PM
Thank you, Charmaine! Fun fact: According to Just Richest, the world’s most expensive champagnes are: Shipwrecked 1907 Heidseick, sold for $275,000 per bottle. It was recovered from a shipwreck in the Baltic Sea in 1997. Glad you enjoyed.
Fowler Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 7:46 AM
LOL. It works for some. Nicely done! :)
Anaya Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 11:17 AM
I was surprised, in the mood for champagne, and all we had was Chardenay and beer, we mixed them, voila! LOl
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