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Poured Delight

Effervescence
of sparkling champagne
caressing the glass
in ebullient mood
euphoria.


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Chosen p.o.t.d. 22Apr2016

Copyright © Paul Callus | Year Posted 2016

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May 11, 2017 at 5:26 PM

It's a very nice moments of euphoria for a very young effervescence heart that brings a lot of ebullient energy. Excellently done my dear friend. An excellent 7 and congrats on POTD. Loved always, bl

May 13, 2017 at 9:08 AM

I am pleased to see you back on Soup, BL. Thank you for reading and commenting so favourably, my friend. Best regards // paul

April 30, 2016 at 9:46 AM

Now here's something fully described and with meaning. I enjoyed it.

April 30, 2016 at 5:35 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments, Mark...and the pleasant visits I've had from you today! ~ Regards // paul

April 27, 2016 at 12:08 PM

Congrats on POTD, my friend. I've only tried champagne once, but you make me want to give it another go with your tasty descriptions ... "caressing the glass" ... very nice!

April 30, 2016 at 5:46 PM

Many thanks my friend:) The ideal 'drink' is when the glass is caressed both by the drinker and by its contents...mutual satisfaction! ~ All the best. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2016 at 5:30 PM

Fantastic metaphor for life and POTD. Awesome and congrats.

April 27, 2016 at 12:49 PM

You read my poem well, Andrea! Thank you for the 'awesome' and congrats:) Regards // paul

April 24, 2016 at 7:07 PM

Lovely little Tanka Paul, makes me feel like a glass, congrat's on POTD, take care......Vera

April 26, 2016 at 12:32 PM

Thank you Vera. Careful on the bubbly:) ~ Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

April 23, 2016 at 5:32 PM

Back to give my Congratulations on POTD Paul! You already know I love this one. Cheers, Connie : )

April 24, 2016 at 10:34 AM

Thank you for coming back with congrats, Connie; a 2nd visit is always appreciated:) Regards // paul

April 22, 2016 at 9:56 PM

Congrats on your POTD!

April 24, 2016 at 4:23 PM

Thank you Moon Flower! ~ Warm regards // paul

April 22, 2016 at 8:15 PM

Lovely poem, Paul, brought a smile with the imagery. Almost tasted the bubbly!

April 24, 2016 at 4:16 PM

Glad you enjoyed the poem and the bubbly, Karam:) Pleased to have you visiting. // paul

April 22, 2016 at 6:19 PM

Congrats on this POTD! The vision of rising bubbles is very vivid!

April 24, 2016 at 3:51 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting, Walter; pleased to have you stopping by. // paul

April 22, 2016 at 6:15 PM

Hello Paul, I'll certainly drink to that!! A "7" too!! Congratulations on POTD here!! Sparkling Champagne and its effervescence is a really neat image for your Tanka. (I recently returned to Poetry Soup after being away for a while. Great to be back.) Cheers and Best, Gary

April 24, 2016 at 3:40 PM

Great to have you back, Gary! I knew you had several ongoing projects; I hope that most of them have been dealt with. Thank you for enjoying my sparkling champagne:) ~ All the best....paul

April 22, 2016 at 2:11 PM

Hi PaulBeautiful Tanka:

April 24, 2016 at 3:18 PM

Thank you, Ralph; pleased that you enjoyed. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 22, 2016 at 2:11 PM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Paul - Beautiful - hugs // Sun :)

April 24, 2016 at 3:12 PM

Thank you Anne Lise; your congrats and support are appreciated:) hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian

April 22, 2016 at 11:06 AM

Beautiful, my dear. Simply beautiful. I see that I need to congratulate you on POTD. I'm happy it's you. Hugs.

April 24, 2016 at 3:01 PM

Thank you for the 'beautiful' comments and congrats, Eileen:) My muse is on 'go-slow' at the moment; also finding it hard to deal with mail in my in-tray! Hugs // paul

April 22, 2016 at 10:59 AM

What year was that? Congratulations on POTD...

April 24, 2016 at 2:12 PM

Now you got me stumped, Charlie! I can remember the taste but not the date:) Thanks for the congrats. Regards // paul

April 22, 2016 at 9:31 AM

Oh I do like the very odd glass of champagne Paul - a sparkling write congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

April 24, 2016 at 2:11 PM

I rarely touch champagne, Jan, but I enjoy a glass on special occasions. I much prefer red wine. Thank you for sharing this champaney poem with me:) hugs // paul

April 22, 2016 at 7:56 AM

Congrats, euphoric words

April 24, 2016 at 1:49 PM

Thank you, Sizwe. Pleased to make your acquaintance. ~ paul

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 22, 2016 at 6:32 AM

What a delight, dear Paul! Here's to your poetic talent, my friend! Congratulations!

April 24, 2016 at 1:38 PM

Many thanks, Demi! Thank you for a lovely visit, my friend. Regards // paul

April 21, 2016 at 2:24 PM

Let the bubbles go up your nose, then laugh. Love, daver

April 24, 2016 at 1:18 PM

I tried it Dave...and could not stop sneezing:) Thanks for a pleasant visit, my friend. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

April 21, 2016 at 4:11 AM

Oh, I love this one Paul! Perfect description of the giddy way champagne makes one feel. #7 (This is the first time I have noticed the new "Poets I follow" link. I love it. I makes it so much easier to see when new poems are posted. Great work from the PSTeam. ; )

April 24, 2016 at 10:29 AM

Glad you enjoyed this champagney poem, Connie! Thank you! I noticed the new link....it facilitates things. PSTeam is doing its best to please us. ~ Regards // paul

April 20, 2016 at 7:18 PM

The mood of enjoyment is in boom with friends, the way of expression is exceptional my lovely friend. My favorite poet and poem both. A great 7. Loved always, bl

April 24, 2016 at 10:23 AM

You are kind, BL; thank you for the generous comments, and the high rating! ~ All the best, my friend. // paul

Charmaine Chircop

April 20, 2016 at 3:36 PM

This is a beauty.It could easily be published in tanka journal -A fave.

April 23, 2016 at 4:14 PM

Thank you for the faith you show in it, Charm:) So...9.30am it is:) Goodnight....paul

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