Pour Me Another Poem

pour me another poem
make it straight
something to cut the edge
an end to an otherwise
imperfect day

give me something strong
a poem to open my eyes
one that is guaranteed
in that very first sip
to take my breath away

i’ll let you know
if it truly suits my taste
and if by some miracle
it does fit my need
leave the bottle
please

and i will drink
until the poem
is empty and wipe 
drooled stanzas
on my sleeve
slurred words 
and blurred lines
muttered neat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Coulstock Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 4:22 AM
Very witty! Hopefully you will find plenty to get inebriated on here and drink to your heart’s content.I enjoyed this very much RD thank you.
Mcmanes Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thank you Sylvia, appreciate the time and comment. RD
Teagan Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 11:41 PM
hah! I love this! I can relate as I am spending my time tonight getting a bit tipsy on poetry :)
Mcmanes Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 9:12 AM
Thank you Becca, lol a healthier option for me and I agree poetry can be intoxicating. RD
Stanworth Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 2:42 AM
What a great poem. There are some wonderful lines in here. I particularly enjoyed the last stanza.
Mcmanes Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 9:13 AM
Thank you George, appreciate your comment and glad you enjoyed the last stanza, always nice to know the closer worked for a reader. RD
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