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Note:  Greyhound is a U.S. bus line.

Pound-Bound Hellhound

Doggone it, that blasted pup irks me
He thinks he’s my Mom’s fav’rite pee wee
     He grabs harmful toys
     From rascally boys
Then chews them while gloating, bad beastie!

I’m coming for you, Mr. Hellhound
I’ll see you returned to the pet pound
     The blues you will sing
     So just take a swing
One scratch on my head, you’ll go Greyhound





Image “B” Chosen
*Written December 16, 2018
For James Edward Lee Sr.’s “Baby Face, What’s You Thinkin’” Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
February 5, 2019 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn!!
Raven Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 4:18 PM
Hi Carolyn, loved the content of your limerick. That picture is so funny. Looks like someone means business. The limerick fits the image perfectly. good luck in the contest. have a wonderful Saturday. hugs....Mike. XX
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Creative work. He does look like a tough little codger. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
La France Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Carolyn, this is so cute and well done, really creative for the contest, best of luck ~
Laurie Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 8:46 PM
G'day Carolyn … a couple of fine limericks to match the babes expression - well done; thank you - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:24 PM
You've really nailed this one -- A perfect match for that tough-guy babyface. G.L. in the contest, Carolyn! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Oh that one is hilarious. Great photo too. Thanks for the laugh.
Devonshire Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Thanks for all your visits today, M.L. I'm enjoying your work!
Callus Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:28 AM
Limericks come so natural to you, Carolyn. He's quite a tough one this baby...but at least I can't hear any four-letter words being uttered!! Have a lovely day...hugs // paul
Devonshire Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:13 PM
Thanks, Paul. Don't think he's learned any four-letter words yet :)
Proxenos Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Carolyn I loved your limerick and the illustration, quite a mean little face! Good luck - sure this poem will be looked upon very favourably - good luck Carolyn. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 11:08 AM
Thanks, Jennifer. The baby's face is quite a photo.
Pandit Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:10 AM
That facial expression sure says what you wrote..a fun read, Carolyn..exactly what the theme evokes. Best for a win.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 8:58 PM
fun fun fun. this is the one I wanted to do too. If I ever get the time. I had so much to do today, Carolyn and still I did not finish.
Leffanta Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 8:12 PM
After watching AFV, it amazes me that ANYONE would allow an animal in their home, never mind around their baby! Good luck in the contest, and I'm happy I don't have to look at that baby face across the breakfast table! Aloha! Rico
Devonshire Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:10 PM
He does sort of look like he's taunting and I agree, that face won't disrupt my morning tea. Thanks for your visit, Rico!
Allison Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 5:39 PM
what fun limericks Carolyn:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 10:10 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Jan.
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:02 PM
Two great limericks Carolyn..
Devonshire Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:04 PM
Thanks, Silent One. Really just one double.
Onclaud Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 3:24 PM
gritty babe ready to punch that pup anytime... your humor knocks my shoes off, carolyn; very good lim!...huggs
Devonshire Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 3:49 PM
Thanks, Nette. Hope you have a great holiday season.
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