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Pothole State Park

Honolulu's Pothole State Park
Is a scary place after dark
With potholes so deep
Anything could creep
From octopus to Great White Shark!

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Carolyn Devonshire

February 2, 2020 at 2:08 PM

Rico, I looked up this park and it has even more potholes than the area of NJ where I grew up. LOL In Florida we have sinkholes that open up suddenly and swallow homes, cars, businesses. I'm hoping to visit Hawaii in the fall and this is one sight I'd like to see! Hugs, Carolyn

Janice Canerdy

February 1, 2020 at 7:28 PM

Good one, Rico. There have been some horrific stories on the news about potholes! Janice

Jan Allison

January 31, 2020 at 12:09 PM

Yeah we got those pot holes here too :-( the only sharks are those who toss abit of asphalt in andnot repairthem properly and have to go back a few weeks later and do it again:-( hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

January 31, 2020 at 12:21 PM

You must have read the Honolulu Advertiser this morning as that is a major complaint here, where numbers are more important than quality! Aloha! Rico