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Pothole State Park

Honolulu's Pothole State Park Is a scary place after dark With potholes so deep Anything could creep From octopus to Great White Shark!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 2/2/2020 2:08:00 PM
Rico, I looked up this park and it has even more potholes than the area of NJ where I grew up. LOL In Florida we have sinkholes that open up suddenly and swallow homes, cars, businesses. I'm hoping to visit Hawaii in the fall and this is one sight I'd like to see! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/1/2020 7:28:00 PM
Good one, Rico. There have been some horrific stories on the news about potholes! Janice
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Date: 1/31/2020 12:09:00 PM
Yeah we got those pot holes here too :-( the only sharks are those who toss abit of asphalt in andnot repairthem properly and have to go back a few weeks later and do it again:-( hugs Jan xx
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/31/2020 12:21:00 PM
You must have read the Honolulu Advertiser this morning as that is a major complaint here, where numbers are more important than quality! Aloha! Rico
Date: 1/28/2020 6:29:00 PM
Crikey Rico … pothole was a nickname I was given at one place because I was always in the road - thanks for the reminder Rico - Lindsay
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/29/2020 2:29:00 PM
Still no cars on the roads Down Under? Thanks for reading, mate! Aloha! Rico
Date: 1/28/2020 5:00:00 PM
ha! sounds like a place i'd like to skip visiting, rico! i enjoyed your limerick, though...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 1/29/2020 2:30:00 PM
Honolulu is Pothole Heaven; all the really deep ones end up here! Luckily, there is still the beach! Aloha! Rico