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Potentiality

Sonnet 03252017: POTENTIALITY Today, a day of smiles and late thawing Despite Man Winter’s stubborn lingering Today – I saw my first butterfly First of Spring - weeks later I would know why Robins darting up then down behind me Uncommon in commonly seen beauty With today’s solitary butterfly Season to sow seeds that will multiply Into springs of potentiality Unlike fishing for death, corollary Of leisure, eyes, on water - not sky Where goes our fragile, yellow butterfly Dirt is sacred form; water – it’s lifeblood; Sky, source of smiles in today’s neighborhood. © A. S. Deo’s 2000 poem edited today

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Date: 3/26/2017 12:37:00 AM
Beautiful nature imagery, can almost feel spring in it.
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Anil Deo
Date: 3/26/2017 4:31:00 AM
Darren, that's a great compliment to any writer ..."to feel" the subject in the writing. Blessings & thanks. Shalom, AD.
Date: 3/25/2017 8:24:00 PM
Right on, Anil! Good job. : ) A wise poem, so well constructed, a pleasure to read.
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Anil Deo
Date: 3/26/2017 4:32:00 AM
Doug, your words are generous and very kind. Thanks and Shalom. AD.
Date: 3/25/2017 7:56:00 PM
Really beautiful Anil. A 7! Butterflies are amazing! Love the final couplet.
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Anil Deo
Date: 3/26/2017 4:33:00 AM
Phil, thanks so much. Blessings and Shalom. (I am NOT used to such generosity, and I am blessed by it). AD

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