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'potential In-Laws'

I heard about them
hope they are prepared for me
I am not the ex

his mom’s favorite 
I’ll show her respect, that’s me
besides he loves me

that is important
they live in another town
my future in-laws 


By: Wilma N. Neels

050620111145


Contest : In Laws
7th place

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John Freeman

Date: 6/8/2011 8:16:00 PM

Wilma, good to see you in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/8/2011 10:18:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 6/7/2011 12:08:00 PM

Many congrats, Wilma : )

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/7/2011 8:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2011 9:00:00 PM

good one about "potentials" Congrats on your win, sweetie.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2011 3:52:00 PM

wow Wilma another great win to enjoy with many congrats on an excellent entry for Dr. Ram in laws contest.. amazing words .. enjoy luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/6/2011 3:20:00 PM

Congratultions on the seventh place win in my contest, Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 9:12:00 PM

typo, I meant HIS mom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2011 9:11:00 PM

WAy to do it, write about the future in laws!! Add into this: not to marry the guy who can't get along with him mom!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/5/2011 12:39:00 PM

Wilma, it must be tough to marry a man whose ex is his mother's favorite. Thank goodness they live in another town. And I'm sure you would be kind to the ex; it's in your nature. Dr. Ram will appreciate your terrific entry. Best wishes in his contest, dear. Love, Carolyn