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Yup, what’s up with pop talking about the charm of high school. LOL

Old girlfriends, my dad’s drifting down that path, Into death valley as my mom seethes wrath. The old man’s gone crazy. His mind sharp, not lazy. Mom’s dried the dishes. Dad’s in the flight path. 6/20/2018

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Date: 6/20/2018 10:18:00 AM
I can relate to that!!! LOL Sweet write dear Kim!!! XOX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/20/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thanks, Jack! :)

Book: Shattered Sighs