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Yup, what’s up with pop talking about the charm of high school. LOL

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Old girlfriends, my dad’s drifting down that path,
Into death valley as my mom seethes wrath.
The old man’s gone crazy.
His mind sharp, not lazy.
Mom’s dried the dishes. Dad’s in the flight path.

6/20/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ellison Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:18 AM
I can relate to that!!! LOL Sweet write dear Kim!!! XOX
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Thanks, Jack! :)
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