Potency

I LOVE IT! POTENT WRITE!

Hey Wilma, Thnx for the comments left on my writes. Means a lot to me, always. Jimmy

And those whispers are worth listening to, Wilma..beautifully delivered. Have a great weekend! Love, Audrey

Nice image Miss W. "whisper through My Pen"!!! wish I thought of that line lol so much enjoyed your work my dear friend and partner in crime...Love Michael

believe me, I need that pen-- well a sonneteer's pen but Andrea's not lending me hers...and you better go back to sleep, Missy-- I won't even tell you how many hours sleep I got in case I make you jealous-- all I can say is-- you got my sleepless bug! awake at 3am?? tsk tsk tsk... hugs to you! hope you'll have a better week next week :)

oh my goodness- I am too lazy to edit my comment-- did I just say "you sure loved this one" ---O_o I meant "I"-- I sure loved this one!! going to my faves!! :D told you I need that pen!! hand it over! ;)

WOW! you sure loved this one--each line was power packed in my opinion-- and loved how you say you whisper through your pen-- now go hand me over that pen please??? how you doing?? ttyl :)

you are hot today!! Let me bask in your warmth and learn! Great write!

Wilma....what a great Tanka ! Line three really sparks this write, much love, james

Poetry at it's best Wilma, terrific write. Have a great weekend girl. ps, I'm on holiday again, Yippeeeee!!!!! >> James ;)

Loved the lines 'unless I whisper them through my pen, then I smile again…'. It really feels better after you write your heart out, doesn't it?:) Great tanka, Wilma!Emilia

Oh, this is a quiet masterpiece. Shhhhh! Love, Dave

A great way to phrase your thoughts dear Wilma in this lovely Tanka... that first line is a great intro luv.. enjoyed my friend ...

Great idea that you have penned and the presentation is excellent ...I am glad that I chose this one to read this A.M...I was delighted that you found something of value in reading of my poem "Iridescent Raindrops"...Sara

That is how poetry is borne, nice thought, Wilma

When thoughts are troubling us, it really does help to ease the "anguish" if you write about them. Very insightful and creative tanka, Wilma. Love, Carolyn

I love that line, "unless I whisper them through my pen" awesome way to see it!! Luv, andrea

nice poetry. enjoyed