Pot O' Gold

Like a leprechauns butch haircut,
the daffodils pierce
March’s maple blanketed bed.
Hidden gold at the end of a spring rainbow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/8/2013 7:26:00 PM
Debbie What a cute little ode to spring. You captured its essence in a short but creative write. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my Christmas Tale poem Hugs
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Date: 3/18/2009 9:34:00 AM
Powerful mythos, great write. Love
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Date: 3/7/2009 4:10:00 PM
This is just beautiful!!! I love the metaphor... and thankyou for the comment on Waiting!!!
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Date: 3/4/2009 5:30:00 PM
I like this one it makes me want to do a little jig. It is light and springy if that makes any sense at all. You write it in a way that I can actually picture dancing beneath the rainbow. LOL Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/4/2009 1:17:00 PM
THINK SPRING!!!!!!!!!! God Bless. Vince
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Date: 3/3/2009 7:43:00 PM
Makes me want to rush spring,God Bless,Marie
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Date: 3/2/2009 2:45:00 PM
The visuals are awesome in this wonderful write, Deb! Thank you for the opportunity to be part of The Chairs Tale contest! I had fun writing that one! Love, Robin (I swing on stars every chance I get! :) ) Love ya!
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Date: 3/2/2009 11:25:00 AM
I like this..very springtime feel..can smell the leaves and wet earth!
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:34:00 AM
Nice alliteration in L3 Debbie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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