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Pot O' Gold

Like a leprechauns butch haircut,
the daffodils pierce
March’s maple blanketed bed.
Hidden gold at the end of a spring rainbow.

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Robin Davis

December 8, 2013 at 7:26 PM

Debbie What a cute little ode to spring. You captured its essence in a short but creative write. Nice job Thanks for the nice comment on my Christmas Tale poem Hugs

L'Nass Shango

March 18, 2009 at 9:34 AM

Powerful mythos, great write. Love

Hana Ryusaka

March 7, 2009 at 4:10 PM

This is just beautiful!!! I love the metaphor... and thankyou for the comment on Waiting!!!

Lena Townsend

March 4, 2009 at 5:30 PM

I like this one it makes me want to do a little jig. It is light and springy if that makes any sense at all. You write it in a way that I can actually picture dancing beneath the rainbow. LOL Smiles from Lolita

Vince Suzadail Jr.

March 4, 2009 at 1:17 PM

THINK SPRING!!!!!!!!!! God Bless. Vince

Marie Prance

March 3, 2009 at 7:43 PM

Makes me want to rush spring,God Bless,Marie

Robin L. Gass

March 2, 2009 at 2:45 PM

The visuals are awesome in this wonderful write, Deb! Thank you for the opportunity to be part of The Chairs Tale contest! I had fun writing that one! Love, Robin (I swing on stars every chance I get! :) ) Love ya!