Pot Knows

Truth and false
mixed in a pot
Chemistry expert researches
pot knows the result
before he finds

introspectioni do not know?

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Amanda Moore

July 25, 2011 at 5:05 PM

bl If I might make a suggestion? your desire to write is evident and you will do well but please look up the structure definition of the poem before you tackle it. A Haiku is three lines only of 5-7-5 syllables. Writ/ing /a/ Hai/ku Is/ not /hard/ once/ you/ start/ it Then/ the/ words/ will /flow what you have here could be free verse, then your "flow" can be different because free verse lacks structure of the Haiku type.... throw in a few descriptive words here you'd have a great start!

Bl Devnath

July 25, 2011 at 7:36 PM

Good morning. I am very very lucky that I am inspired to see the mistake. Before tackling, I shall see many times. Thanks for your suggestion.