Pot Knows

Truth and false mixed in a pot Chemistry expert researches pot knows the result before he finds

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Amanda Moore

Date: 7/25/2011 5:05:00 PM

bl If I might make a suggestion? your desire to write is evident and you will do well but please look up the structure definition of the poem before you tackle it. A Haiku is three lines only of 5-7-5 syllables. Writ/ing /a/ Hai/ku Is/ not /hard/ once/ you/ start/ it Then/ the/ words/ will /flow what you have here could be free verse, then your "flow" can be different because free verse lacks structure of the Haiku type.... throw in a few descriptive words here you'd have a great start!

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/25/2011 7:36:00 PM

Good morning. I am very very lucky that I am inspired to see the mistake. Before tackling, I shall see many times. Thanks for your suggestion.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2011 2:28:00 AM

enjoyed this one, have a good weekend,..p.d.

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/24/2011 11:55:00 AM

Thanks for wishing a good weekend. Just trying to express my inherent feeling through poem. I am learning and trying to learn. bl

Jessica Delisky

Date: 7/24/2011 1:24:00 AM

It needs more of a flow and it does not make much of a point

Bl Devnath
Date: 7/24/2011 5:58:00 PM

Yes, I agree. Thanks for your comment.bl