Pot Hole

carrying heavey load
on a bad road
go slow
the wheel  are not steel
can be mole
WATCH FOR
POT HOLES
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
August 21, 2012 at 1:01 AM
They haven't been around to fix the road lately. A mess of pot holes is what I see. We have to do our driving carefully. Struts and shocks cost a pretty penny. What happened to that money we pay in taxes? It's about time to give our elected officials the axes!
Guzzi Avatar
August 4, 2012 at 7:15 AM
Interesting write it shows how we can literally tear ourselfs apart ..THINKING! Light & Love
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