Post-Thanksgiving Request

Dear Pastor, please feel free 
to preach the truth to me
on lying, prying, crying,
on trying, sighing, dying
but, I beg, not gluttony.


January 20, 2019, entered in Juli-Michelle's Rhyme Battle XII
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Roper Avatar
December 6, 2015 at 11:43 PM
Janice, congratulations on your win this is cute!
Canerdy Avatar
December 7, 2015 at 8:06 AM
Thank you, Eve. Janice
A. Sharma Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Wonderful poem and win Janice... big congrats!
Canerdy Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 8:39 AM
Thank you, Upma. I'm glad you liked it. Janice
A  Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 10:02 PM
Janice, Congratulations on your sweet win. Enjoyed your entry. LUV SKAT
Canerdy Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 10:10 PM
I'm so glad you liked it, SKAT. Janice
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace