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My love left me a letter, "Dear one, I hate to make you frown, But there seems to be a part That's missing from my heart. I need to find it Before I can settle down." Then she sent me a postcard, It read, "Caro, ciao from Rome." She loved the music, food, and wine, And the Vatican was fine, And she didn't know When she'd be coming home. She caught a cold in London, Thought she'd glimpsed the King at tea. The Thames was far less than sublime, But Big Ben keeps perfect time, And the galleries Reminded her of me. She got a tan in Rio, The beach there is divine. Confessed she'd had a little fling, And leaned a most peculiar thing, That Brazilian kisses Don't compare to mine. Then in a card one morning, "Dear one, I'm coming home. The world's too big and much too wide Without you by my side, And I've realized I didn't need to roam." Now my love's done with traveling, And she knows in her heart and mind That the thing she went to find Was the love she left behind And wasn't missing, It was right here all the time. Author's note: To paraphrase Dorothy in "The Wizard of Oz", sometimes if you go looking for your heart's desire, you don't have to look further than your own backyard.

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Date: 12/3/2023 12:16:00 PM
I enjoyed this one . She had to get the wanderlust out of her to appreciate "there's no place like home".
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/4/2023 10:05:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea, and let's hope so.
Date: 12/3/2023 4:28:00 AM
A wonderful poem with a difficult rhyme scheme. Your talent is amazing. Fantastic write my friend.
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/3/2023 10:26:00 AM
Jerry, thank you. My pieces always sort of seem to choose their own path. I just follow along as best I can.
Date: 12/2/2023 3:09:00 PM
Yeah, but the question is: would he take her back? I certainly wouldn't. Nice poetic story Jim
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Tom Woody
Date: 12/3/2023 10:48:00 AM
And cheating lol
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/3/2023 10:25:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, and of course he would. After all, she did keep in touch all throughout her roaming.
Date: 12/2/2023 2:05:00 PM
a wonderful poem, jim, with a very interesting rhyme scheme (which you've written in quite brilliantly!). i very much enjoyed...
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/3/2023 10:23:00 AM
Many thanks, Ilene. Do people still send postcards these days?
Date: 12/2/2023 12:50:00 PM
No matter where we go we always end up home...I'm a homely person and I've never understood those who move away far far away...I love travelling though..Great poem Jim
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Jim Slaughter
Date: 12/3/2023 10:22:00 AM
Thanks, S O, and You're right...except for those of us whose home is wherever we happen to be. And I suspect you are more of a "homebody" than a "homely" guy. I got all my traveling urges out of my system in my much younger days.

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