Post of Submission

We had a place like that...
       out behind the wood shed!

Where it was all over but the doughnuts and shrieks!

Speaking of doughnuts...
    the long arm of the law, or should I say strong arm, 
              has a post of submission too.

Yep they beat you until you confess in submission.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 11:06 PM
this is quiet interesting write...love it...^_^ v
Babcock Avatar
October 16, 2010 at 10:27 AM
I have two brothers who are cops. They do have some stories but I must say neither one of them like donuts. ha ha Love Phyl
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October 15, 2010 at 1:44 PM
Very good write my Poet friend, always an inspiration to read your poems and comments...Love Michael
D. Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 11:05 AM
very intersting, Doris enjoyed' luv n.d
A  Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 9:55 AM
WELL SAID*luv~SKAT
Knop Avatar
October 15, 2010 at 4:31 AM
Deep tuch of truth in your poem, Doris! Enjoyed the read this afternoon. Now I waiting for my guest to come. I prepared a nice cake and a creamsheese tart. Thank you for your ongoing comments!...Gert
Moribund Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 12:08 PM
Hi Doris: Great poem. Comparing parental discipline with that of the law is very interesting and more times the naught...true. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Peace: Sheol
Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 6:49 AM
Interesting write...Mom
Neels Avatar
October 14, 2010 at 6:26 AM
Witty write Doris, been hectic the last couple of days at work.. Will make an effort to send some your way via FB or SM? ;) Wilma
Sweetheart Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 8:14 PM
OUCH .. is this true??? I know city police are notorious for this kind of behavior ... my ex was a cop.... oh the stories he took home..luv.. a grand expression here but aren't they always eating doughnuts? haha.. running joke about that.. here in New Jersey ...oh yes they do... but still manage to stay physically fit...how can that be???
Maverick Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 12:47 PM
Dear doris enjoyed the above, very inventive a touch of truth (sadly) can't wait to read some more.
Devonshire Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Funny thoughts are springing from your pen lately, Doris. Are you enjoying tickling our funny bones? This is very cute. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Very witty, interesing and humorous write , Doris
Horsman Avatar
October 12, 2010 at 9:33 PM
enjoyed this Doris, thanks for he comments on my stuff. in answer to your question on silliness. Doris it's my honest opinion, yu are one hell of a lady, i love your sense of Humour, and also what you write, you are one intelligent lady. Harry
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