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Post of Submission

We had a place like that... out behind the wood shed! Where it was all over but the doughnuts and shrieks! Speaking of doughnuts... the long arm of the law, or should I say strong arm, has a post of submission too. Yep they beat you until you confess in submission.

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Juan Paolo Galua

Date: 10/16/2010 11:06:00 PM

this is quiet interesting write...love it...^_^ v

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/16/2010 10:27:00 AM

I have two brothers who are cops. They do have some stories but I must say neither one of them like donuts. ha ha Love Phyl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/15/2010 1:44:00 PM

Very good write my Poet friend, always an inspiration to read your poems and comments...Love Michael

Nate D.

Date: 10/15/2010 11:05:00 AM

very intersting, Doris enjoyed' luv n.d

Skat A

Date: 10/15/2010 9:55:00 AM

WELL SAID*luv~SKAT

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/15/2010 4:31:00 AM

Deep tuch of truth in your poem, Doris! Enjoyed the read this afternoon. Now I waiting for my guest to come. I prepared a nice cake and a creamsheese tart. Thank you for your ongoing comments!...Gert

Sheol Moribund

Date: 10/14/2010 12:08:00 PM

Hi Doris: Great poem. Comparing parental discipline with that of the law is very interesting and more times the naught...true. Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem. Peace: Sheol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2010 6:49:00 AM

Interesting write...Mom

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/14/2010 6:26:00 AM

Witty write Doris, been hectic the last couple of days at work.. Will make an effort to send some your way via FB or SM? ;) Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/13/2010 8:14:00 PM

OUCH .. is this true??? I know city police are notorious for this kind of behavior ... my ex was a cop.... oh the stories he took home..luv.. a grand expression here but aren't they always eating doughnuts? haha.. running joke about that.. here in New Jersey ...oh yes they do... but still manage to stay physically fit...how can that be???

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/13/2010 12:47:00 PM

Dear doris enjoyed the above, very inventive a touch of truth (sadly) can't wait to read some more.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/13/2010 12:43:00 PM

Funny thoughts are springing from your pen lately, Doris. Are you enjoying tickling our funny bones? This is very cute. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/13/2010 5:17:00 AM

Very witty, interesing and humorous write , Doris

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/12/2010 9:33:00 PM

enjoyed this Doris, thanks for he comments on my stuff. in answer to your question on silliness. Doris it's my honest opinion, yu are one hell of a lady, i love your sense of Humour, and also what you write, you are one intelligent lady. Harry