Post Mortem

Post Mortem by David Lustrup 2011

Here I lay....dead
Icy ,black, thick blood, motionless in my veins
Yet i see from my eyes.
Numbness, this world of grey.

I hear the sound of birds wings--scratching, fluttering, playing in reverse.
I lay in rigor, the world goes by in scattered frames.
And the sound is out of sync.

Deafening silence. The icy chill in these bladed raindrops.
I feel them hit my naked lifeless body like anvils,
As I lie cold and dead in this freezing grave of your absence.
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August 18, 2017 at 9:05 PM
Full of sensory details. Great!
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August 18, 2017 at 8:53 PM
What a beautiful expression of love for your someday-to-be child!
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August 18, 2017 at 8:47 PM
Vividly cold and empty! "Bladed raindrops" is brilliant.
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