Possibly Real

Strewn with buds upon night’s skyscape ,
we followed  the hovel of an outer-world
As fluted leaves
 formed a hologram of our map--
a journey granting passage 
into real existence;
Where our twin- souls moved in silence.

I felt your hands cuddling a bounty of flowers
And we meet in Portugal 
third instance,
Cleansing lost time in holy water.

The procession of candles brushed the air
quite sacred:  white lilies unfurling petals 
into hundred lights
 on the shrine
of mother Mary , 
while young stars crowned us again...
was it 1918 when our eyes first met here? 

Till we strolled through a monolith of statues
blessing our paths ...aligning our thoughts
In the house of Fatima, of transparent gods;
taking our silent vows 
with co-owned vintage cameos...

But the vision turns into ripples;
 I’m by myself ,
a lone pilgrim 
trapped around a grotto...wondering 
if this scene were  chimeric illusion
or timeless reality...

How I longingly touch your face, 
feeling those sighs , like...
like they were my own earthy breath.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Hind Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 11:48 AM
very beautiful
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 5:28 AM
Nette, romantic and descriptive of times past. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. 👍✍️. Sara K.
Greece Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 2:36 AM
Charming and surreal when one thinks of having a soul mate. You have one? Another masterpiece from you.
Kerr Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:39 PM
A haunting, emotional odyssey of genuine attachment and everlasting longing real or imagined. Lyrical and observant, Nette.🔥🔥🔥 I wish to thank you for your observations on Amethyst On Stalk. They are really kind. Howard
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