Donald J Bennett Poet Rhyme

Possibilities

See the toddler traipsing by
His diaper hanging low

See the cool cat in his baggy pants
How much lower can they go?

Toddler seems to have made a number two
Really needs a diaper change

For the young fella with the baggy pants
Appears that possibility may also be true?

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Joseph Matose November 21, 2013 at 1:09 AM This is awesomely funny Donald. Hope the fellas will pull them up little bit, I mean pull up the denim diapers! JM

Chipepo Lwele September 21, 2012 at 5:29 AM Great write.Reminds me of our toddler'mapalo'.

Cindy Lu August 22, 2012 at 5:51 PM cute write. Do I know you? Cindy Cayton

Jack Ellison August 21, 2012 at 6:33 PM Love it... have been thinking the same thing! LOL Kerry Singleton says she feels like pulling them up. I feel like pulling them down! LOL! Cheers, Jack

Sara Kendrick August 21, 2012 at 5:43 PM I totally agree with this one..I saw a fellow the other day and he absolutely had them hanging just above the knees..Could you imagine trying to walk in those pants?...Great topic and presentation..Thanks for stopping by..I am glad that you shared with your wife and she found it funny also..Sara

Joann Grisetti August 18, 2012 at 5:23 PM Funny; would love to read this to some of the students at school.

Cynthia Alvez August 15, 2012 at 9:54 PM Need for changes it seems with the possibilities at 50%...Nice verse! Cynthia

Kerry Singleton August 14, 2012 at 4:01 AM Baggy pants annoy me, feel like pulling them up.. good write Donald & thank you for your visit :)

David Williams August 12, 2012 at 1:20 PM Donald I like, thanks for your comments..David

Francine Roberts August 11, 2012 at 11:43 PM baggy pants is a fad I have never understood, another witty piece you've penned

Robert Pettit August 11, 2012 at 10:50 PM Sphincter muscles controlling the bladder usually get weaker in the elderly. Diapers are for the extremes both young and old. Good write.