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Possessed By Fantasy

Crystalline dreams come rushing on glitters of sensation in her blood… this pure night changed into a dizzy maze , a heady ride on the gush of awakened illusion through wheels swinging a studded jaunt, as the fog in her mind begins to wander into unmentionable thrills of psychedelic blur, wrapped in a magical time like a voodoo- girl unknown by any blink of dire fantasy ................. Lewis Raynes’ That Colorful Drug Contest 6/2/2016 *cocaine is referred to as 'crystalline' alkaloid stimulant * ecstasy is a drug containing hallucinogens which includes cocaine

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Date: 6/5/2016 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on this well written piece taking top honors Nette. I don't think there is any subject you would not be able to tackle well! # ; )
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Date: 6/4/2016 3:09:00 AM
Congratulations. Well done. I particularly like the "crystalline" dreams. Is that metaphore copy-righted?
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Date: 6/3/2016 5:18:00 PM
Amazing journey nette, wonderful poetry.
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Date: 6/3/2016 11:53:00 AM
Hi, Nette. I like to congratulate you on your big win in Lewis Raynes' contest. Your imagery is amazingly fascinating; your words describe beautiful images, " her frail body possessed as it slowly dissipates into a dazzling fantasy ". The entire poem flows with beautiful lines. Be proud of your achievement, you have deserved this win. : ) Have a terrific weekend. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 6/3/2016 11:20:00 AM
Well written my friend, having grown up in a city I saw many die from the use of drugs, it was a long slow process as their bodies slowly changed and life was drained from them
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Date: 6/3/2016 8:43:00 AM
I can see why this piece was chosen. Congratulations, you took us on a trip!
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Date: 6/3/2016 7:56:00 AM
That was some poem! Congrats on your win, Nette. ~karam~
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Date: 6/3/2016 5:56:00 AM
Never, never, have tried anything at all! Not even a normal tobacco cigarette. Never needed, although the difficulties in life were enormous! God within me provided all needed to overcome hurdles BUT now I am intoxicated with your poetry my dear, nette. It sound so grand! Haha! A seven!
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Date: 6/3/2016 1:38:00 AM
A 7! You made the drug seem so ecstatic, Nette!
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:07:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your win in the contest. Ur words made me feel drunk with a wobble. great write.
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Date: 6/2/2016 1:20:00 PM
I haven't tried cocaine but some other substitute for it,I think I strongly relate to the visions so colorfully displayed here.Awesome job Nette.
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Date: 6/2/2016 10:09:00 AM
woah you've described it the way I could imagine it to be.. I've never tried the stuff but I can imagine it would be a colorful ride with a very hard crash at the end. Enjoyed reading your poem.. I think it's really good.
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Date: 6/2/2016 5:07:00 AM
The language of this poem is magnificently expressed through a dark image, "yet nights ask for more cures." May we curb drug abuse!
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