Nette Onclaud Poet Free verse

Possessed By Fantasy

Crystalline dreams 
come rushing
on glitters of sensation 
in her blood…
this pure night changed
 into a dizzy maze , 
a heady ride on the gush 
of awakened illusion

through wheels swinging
 a studded jaunt,
as the fog  in her mind 
begins to wander
into unmentionable thrills 
of psychedelic blur,
wrapped in a magical time 
like a voodoo- girl
unknown by any blink
of dire fantasy


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Lewis Raynes’ That Colorful Drug Contest
6/2/2016
*cocaine is  referred to as 'crystalline' alkaloid stimulant
* ecstasy is a drug containing hallucinogens
   which includes cocaine

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Connie Marcum Wong June 5, 2016 at 5:20 PM Congratulations on this well written piece taking top honors Nette. I don't think there is any subject you would not be able to tackle well! # ; )

Kai Michael Neumann June 4, 2016 at 3:09 AM Congratulations. Well done. I particularly like the "crystalline" dreams. Is that metaphore copy-righted?

Harry Horsman June 3, 2016 at 5:18 PM Amazing journey nette, wonderful poetry.

Andrew Crisci June 3, 2016 at 11:53 AM Hi, Nette. I like to congratulate you on your big win in Lewis Raynes' contest. Your imagery is amazingly fascinating; your words describe beautiful images, " her frail body possessed as it slowly dissipates into a dazzling fantasy ". The entire poem flows with beautiful lines. Be proud of your achievement, you have deserved this win. : ) Have a terrific weekend. Hugs, Andrew.

Frederic Parker June 3, 2016 at 11:20 AM Well written my friend, having grown up in a city I saw many die from the use of drugs, it was a long slow process as their bodies slowly changed and life was drained from them

Richard Lamoureux June 3, 2016 at 8:43 AM I can see why this piece was chosen. Congratulations, you took us on a trip!

Karam Misra June 3, 2016 at 7:56 AM That was some poem! Congrats on your win, Nette. ~karam~

Demetrios Trifiatis June 3, 2016 at 5:56 AM Never, never, have tried anything at all! Not even a normal tobacco cigarette. Never needed, although the difficulties in life were enormous! God within me provided all needed to overcome hurdles BUT now I am intoxicated with your poetry my dear, nette. It sound so grand! Haha! A seven!

Balveen Cheema June 3, 2016 at 1:38 AM A 7! You made the drug seem so ecstatic, Nette!

Lewis Raynes June 2, 2016 at 10:07 PM Congratulations Nette on your win in the contest. Ur words made me feel drunk with a wobble. great write.

Miraj Raha June 2, 2016 at 1:20 PM I haven't tried cocaine but some other substitute for it,I think I strongly relate to the visions so colorfully displayed here.Awesome job Nette.

Becca Teagan June 2, 2016 at 10:09 AM woah you've described it the way I could imagine it to be.. I've never tried the stuff but I can imagine it would be a colorful ride with a very hard crash at the end. Enjoyed reading your poem.. I think it's really good.

Rhoma Em June 2, 2016 at 5:07 AM The language of this poem is magnificently expressed through a dark image, "yet nights ask for more cures." May we curb drug abuse!