Portrait of a Caveman

A throbbing heart moistens cornea
worries of the mind puffs a face
 a dripping nose is most ugly
vulnerable spirits cling to bodies

A cave is dark all day long
Rains make nights darker
men can dance in darkness
but who notes the music?
  
The musician dreads sunshine
the cave will remain his kingdom
so longs as he makes every note sweet
with promise and hope of a bright dawn
 
A promise builds hope 
swirl of dance prepares soul for ejaculation
of a confetti of spirit, new cave, green tune
a bonfire to rival the yellow shy ball

The cruel nimbus breaks its waters
 The caveman retreats like a tortoise
for the sun has aborted its rays
No music today

The hope maker is away
to sweeten his notes with money
Only if the caveman sweetens his dance 
with honey...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
May 15, 2017 at 6:06 PM
Some very nice images in this one , Kilalo. I enjoyed seeing how you write!
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