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Portent of Perseids

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Bright day sets, burns my sorrow, Strewn stars to dust the morrow ... Trailing diamonds 'cross the skies - Spark as hopes 'midst Heaven's eyes. And should they find a shelter, Through one soul that's set apart - They'll end their fiery swelter ... As fresh embers in ... my heart. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Early June 2018 Standard Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Eight Lines" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Sponsor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/14/2018 4:41:00 AM
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Back to congratulate you again. An awesome write!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/14/2018 9:11:00 PM
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Thanks so much, Susan, I appreciate it! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/7/2018 10:08:00 AM
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Wonderful, Gregory. I love your line " Trailing diamonds 'cross the skies ". Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:35:00 PM
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Many kind thanks, Line - so pleased you enjoyed it! :-) <3
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John Hamilton
Date: 6/5/2018 9:33:00 PM
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I'm out of superlatives for your writing Greg, this is well you know... superfantaststical...wow!!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:35:00 PM
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Thank you so very much, my good friend - your opinion is always highly valued! :-)
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Eve Roper
Date: 6/5/2018 10:59:00 AM
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An artist eye sees the imagery in nature, Gregory. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:34:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Eve, that's very sweet of you! :-) <3
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Susan Gentry
Date: 6/4/2018 6:33:00 AM
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This so beautiful! Congratulations on your win with this poem about nature.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:33:00 PM
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That's very kind of you, Susan, thank you so much! :-) <3
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Line Gauthier
Date: 6/3/2018 9:30:00 PM
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Congrats on your top win, Gregory.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:33:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Line! :-)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/3/2018 7:08:00 PM
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Celestial diamonds shooting across the sky..Congrats on your win Greg
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:33:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Joseph! :-)
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/3/2018 7:44:00 AM
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Sigh, wonderful penning my friend. Anything Perseids you know you have my attention, I love what you've done with them here. xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:32:00 PM
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Thank you very much, Mo, I knew you would like this, and always think of you when streaks cross the sky! :-) <3
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Daniel Turner
Date: 6/2/2018 9:44:00 PM
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Not enough superlatives, Greg. You are just too good! A winner for sure.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/9/2018 8:31:00 PM
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This is a very kind comment, Daniel - thank you so much, Brother! :-)

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