poem written based upon this image--for online poetry class
A thin seam of light appears where the world has worn thin. I step closer, feeling the hush gather around me. Nothing opens outward~ instead, the doorway widens within, a soft unfastening of fear, a loosening of the old, tight self. And through that inner brightness, I finally see what has been waiting.
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