Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Sijo

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16.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Precipice, Portal, Perpetual Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

2nd place in the contest

- Portal -

            I walk my last steps on the earthly plains, when the sun sets
          Through another dimension with breathtaking surreal landscape
                   The mystical journey, back to the roots of creation

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Constance La France February 14, 2024 at 8:58 AM Anne-Lise, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image too, hugs, Constance

Speaks Volumes January 25, 2024 at 10:05 AM This should take out top prize in both contests! Entering a portal back to the roots of creation, what a heavenly way to say it. I truly think this so original and meaningful, I hope it gains the praise it deserves Anne -Lise. A fave for me.

Valsa George January 23, 2024 at 4:09 AM Such a meaningful and lovely Sijo ! In the final hours of life, we retrace our steps back to the roots if creation through a surreal landscape. This entry through the great portal assures a life of bliss ! All the Best dear Anne... love and hugs!~

Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2024 at 3:42 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, I felt like I was in an other time. Hugs. /Darlene/

Duke Beaufort January 17, 2024 at 3:06 PM That's a wonderful picture to go with your words. We definitely don't know what the universe has in store in the future. Our lives are just tiny sparks. It's all rather remarkable. You're making me think!

Stephan McBride January 17, 2024 at 2:43 PM Definitely captivating and pulls the reader to the depths of this journey in life , love it, hugs

Silent One January 17, 2024 at 12:10 PM Is this killing two birds with one stone? Lol.. Great idea for the contest.. Best of luck..

Jay Narain January 17, 2024 at 11:10 AM Nicely crafted poem. GL in contest.

Kim Rodrigues January 17, 2024 at 10:50 AM Truly we shall each take that walk. God bless!

Hilda Greenhough January 16, 2024 at 7:24 PM A great story in a poem. I think going back 100 years is my limit. It gave me much to think about.

Joseph May January 16, 2024 at 5:37 PM I love the last line of this well crafted write Anne, best wishes

Frederic Parker January 16, 2024 at 4:36 PM Really nice poem, dear poet, a sense of ending and a new journey begun

Jan Allison January 16, 2024 at 3:59 PM the title is perfect for the poem theme and the image and imagery are fabulous Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick January 16, 2024 at 1:16 PM Creative lines penned in this one and some forward thinking. Thanks for sharing it with us and if it is for the contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara K